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@@ -7,28 +7,29 @@ to the guy when I started seeing the commits from him on pypdflib
 project. Even though I was doing periodic commits to pydpflib, my
 commits were basically just back ground fixes and optimizations rather than
 actual code for pydpflib core functionality. We did find a few issues
-and logged them in savannah project page. \footnote{\url{http://savannah.nongnu.org/bugs/?group=pypdflib}} Jinesh started to
+and logged them in Savannah project page. \footnote{\url{http://savannah.nongnu.org/bugs/?group=pypdflib}} Jinesh started to
 commit on these issues, fixing them one by one. He used to come online
-and discuss things with me and we used to have very long elaborated
+and discuss things with me, and we used to have very long elaborated
 discussions. I still didn't know what Jinesh was doing. It was then
-Santhosh told me that Jinesh was in Hospital fighting Blood Cancer and
-I was shocked to hear that. Because when you talk with him you really
-can't make out that the guy is coding things and chatting from his hospital bed,
-fighting one of the deadliest diseases known to mankind. Well, I didn't
-interact much with him after that. Probably because he was undergoing
+Santhosh told me that Jinesh was in hospital fighting blood cancer. I was shocked to hear that. Because when you talk with him you really
+can't make out that the guy is coding and chatting from his hospital bed,
+fighting one of the deadliest diseases known to mankind. I didn't
+interact much with him after that. Probably he was undergoing
 more medical therapies and was not getting time to come online.
 
 After a month or two, I got the shocking news from Santhosh that Jinesh
-was no more! I did not have words to express my grief. Moreover, if you see the pypdflib
-commit logs, you will see that the last commits were made by Jinesh and after
-him, the project almost went to an inactive state. There are a couple of
-tasks which was assigned to me by Jinesh which I think I never
+was no more. I did not have words to express my grief. If you go through pypdflib
+commit logs, you will see that the last commits were made by Jinesh, and after
+him the project almost went to an inactive state. There are a couple of
+tasks which was assigned to me by Jinesh which I never
 completed.\footnote{\url{http://savannah.nongnu.org/task/?group=pypdflib}}
 
-In short words we lost a great contributor and a good friend. Even
+We lost a great contributor and a good friend. Even
 though we never met, he was a really nice and cheerful person. I will
 miss him.
 
-\begin{flushright}Vasudev Kamath, Contributor - various indic language computing projects\end{flushright}
+\begin{flushright}Vasudev Kamath
+
+Contributor, various Indic language computing projects\end{flushright}
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