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<section id="goals">
<title>Goals</title>
- <para>The goal of SystemTap is to provide infrastructure to monitor the running Linux kernel for detailed analysis. This can assist in identifying the underlying cause of a performance or functional problem.</para>
+ <para>SystemTap provides the infrastructure to monitor the running Linux kernel for detailed analysis. This can assist in identifying the underlying cause of a performance or functional problem.</para>
- <para>Without SystemTap, monitoring the activity of a running kernel would require a tedious instrument, recompile, install, and reboot sequence. SystemTap is designed to eliminate this, allowing you to gather the same information by simply running its suite of tools against specific <firstterm>tapsets</firstterm> or SystemTap scripts.</para>
+ <para>Without SystemTap, monitoring the activity of a running kernel would require a tedious instrument, recompile, install, and reboot sequence. SystemTap is designed to eliminate this, allowing users to gather the same information by simply running its suite of tools against specific <firstterm>tapsets</firstterm> or SystemTap scripts.</para>
<para>However, SystemTap was initially designed for users with intermediate to advanced knowledge of the kernel. This could present a steep learning curve for administrators or developers whose knowledge of the Linux kernel is little to none.</para>
- <para>In line with that, the main goal of the <citetitle>SystemTap Beginner's Guide</citetitle> is two-fold:</para>
+ <para>In line with that, the main goals of the <citetitle>SystemTap Beginner's Guide</citetitle> are as follows:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>To introduce users to SystemTap, familiarize them with its architecture, and provide setup instructions for all kernel types.</para></listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
<!-- </formalpara> -->
<remark>above, Short description on the underlying goals of SystemTap_Beginners_Guide, what we want to teach users.</remark>
-</section>
+</section>
+<!--
<section id="intro-usage">
<title>Usage</title>
<remark>
This section describes the practical uses of SystemTap, at a conceptual level. What a beginner can use SystemTap for, and what an advanced user can use SystemTap for.
</remark>
</section>
-
+ -->
<section id="intro-systemtap-vs-others">
<title>SystemTap Versus Other Monitoring Tools</title>
<remark>