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diff --git a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/CrossInstrumenting.xml b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/CrossInstrumenting.xml
index c4b643d3..fab33217 100644
--- a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/CrossInstrumenting.xml
+++ b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/CrossInstrumenting.xml
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
<para>
When users run a SystemTap script, SystemTap builds a kernel module out of
- that script. SystemTap then loads the module onto the kernel, allowing it to
+ that script. SystemTap then loads the module into the kernel, allowing it to
extract the specified data directly from the kernel (refer to
<xref linkend="systemtapsession"/> in
<xref linkend="understanding-architecture-tools"/> for more information).
@@ -217,17 +217,18 @@
<step>
<para>
Determine the kernel running on each <emphasis>target system</emphasis>
- by running the by running <command>uname -r</command> on each
+ by running <command>uname -r</command> on each
<emphasis>target system</emphasis>.
</para>
</step>
<step>
<para>
- Install SystemTap on the <emphasis>host system</emphasis>. It is from
- this machine that you will be building the <emphasis>instrumentation
- module</emphasis> (to be used on <emphasis>target
- systems</emphasis>). For instructions on how to install SystemTap, refer
+ Install SystemTap on the <emphasis>host system</emphasis>.
+ You will be building the <emphasis>instrumentation
+ module</emphasis> for the <emphasis>target
+ systems</emphasis> on the <emphasis>host system</emphasis>.
+ For instructions on how to install SystemTap, refer
to <xref linkend="installproper"/>.
</para>
</step>
@@ -293,7 +294,7 @@ stap -r <replaceable>kernel_version</replaceable> <replaceable>script</replaceab
<para>
Once the the <emphasis>instrumentation module</emphasis> is compiled, copy
- it to the <emphasis>target system</emphasis> and load it using:
+ it to the <emphasis>target system</emphasis> and then load it using:
</para>
<screen>