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 blog2.tex - Praveen A, Haris Ibrahim K. V.
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 \begin{english}
 \secstar{My notes on Jinesh}
 
-Jinesh, I never met him personally nor I knew who he was. he used to
-send patches once in a while to SILPA project. I actually came close
+Jinesh, I never met him personally nor I knew who he was. He used to
+send patches once in a while to the SILPA project. I actually came close
 to the guy when I started seeing the commits from him on pypdflib
-project, even though I was doing periodic commits to pydpflib my
-commits were basically just back ground fixes and optimisations than
-actual code for pydpflib core functionality. We did find few issues
-and logged them in savannah project page \footnote{\url{http://savannah.nongnu.org/bugs/?group=pypdflib}} and Jinesh starting to
-commit on these issues fixing them one by one. He used to come online
-and discuss things with me, we used to have very long elaborated
-discussions. Still I didn't know what Jinesh was doing. It was then
-Santhosh told me that Jinesh is in Hospital fighting Blood Cancer and
+project. Even though I was doing periodic commits to pydpflib, my
+commits were basically just back ground fixes and optimizations rather than
+actual code for pydpflib core functionality. We did find a few issues
+and logged them in savannah project page. \footnote{\url{http://savannah.nongnu.org/bugs/?group=pypdflib}} Jinesh started to
+commit on these issues, fixing them one by one. He used to come online
+and discuss things with me and we used to have very long elaborated
+discussions. I still didn't know what Jinesh was doing. It was then
+Santhosh told me that Jinesh was in Hospital fighting Blood Cancer and
 I was shocked to hear that. Because when you talk with him you really
-can't make out guy is coding things and chatting from his hospital bed
-fighting one of the worst diseases known to man kind. Well I didn't
-interact much with him after that probably because he was undergoing
+can't make out that the guy is coding things and chatting from his hospital bed,
+fighting one of the deadliest diseases known to mankind. Well, I didn't
+interact much with him after that. Probably because he was undergoing
 more medical therapies and was not getting time to come online.
 
-After one month or 2 I got the shocking news from Santhosh that Jinesh
-is no more! I had no words to express and if you see the pypdflib
-commit logs you will see last commits were made by Jinesh and after
-him the project almost went to inactive state. There are a couple of
+After a month or two, I got the shocking news from Santhosh that Jinesh
+was no more! I did not have words to express my grief. Moreover, if you see the pypdflib
+commit logs, you will see that the last commits were made by Jinesh and after
+him, the project almost went to an inactive state. There are a couple of
 tasks which was assigned to me by Jinesh which I think I never
 completed.\footnote{\url{http://savannah.nongnu.org/task/?group=pypdflib}}
 
 In short words we lost a great contributor and a good friend. Even
-though we never met he was really nice and cheerful person. I will
+though we never met, he was a really nice and cheerful person. I will
 miss him.
 
 Vasudev Kamath , Contributor - various indic language computing projects