[gnome-help] updated some info in 'mouse' pages

4 files changed, 71 insertions, 31 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-style.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-style.page
index 528e4fe..36e10f0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-style.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-style.page
@@ -7,13 +7,15 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#vision" group="lowvision"/>
     
     <desc>
-    Change how the mouse pointer looks
+    Change the color and style of the pointer.
     </desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-22" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
         <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
+        <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+        <email>tiffany.antopolski@gmail.com</email>
     </credit>
     <copyright>
         <year>2009</year>
@@ -23,32 +25,43 @@
     <!-- <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> -->
 </info>
 
-<title>Change the color and style of the pointer</title>
+<title>Change Pointer Style</title>
 
 <steps>
  <item>
   <p>
-  Click 
-  <guiseq><gui>System</gui><gui>Preferences</gui><gui>Appearance</gui></guiseq> 
-  and select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
+  Click <guiseq><gui> Alt </gui><gui> F1 </gui></guiseq> or the Meta key, or touch the pointer to the top left corner (a.k.a. the "hot corner") to enter the <gui> Activities </gui> overview.
   </p>
  </item>
  <item>
+ <p>
+ Type 'appearance'.
+ </p>
+ <p> 
+ Click on the <gui> Appearance </gui> icon to open.
+ </p>
+ <p>
+ Select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
+ </p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
   <p>
-  Click <gui>Customize</gui> and click the <gui>Pointer</gui> tab.
+  Click <gui>Customize</gui> and select the <gui>Pointer</gui> tab.
   </p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Select a different style or color for the pointer from the list. The 
+  <p>Choose a different style or color for the pointer from the list. The 
   changes will be made immediately.
   </p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
+<note>
 <p>
 You cannot change the style and the color of the pointer separately. Each 
 style has a fixed color. Some styles are provided in multiple colors.
 </p>
+</note>
 
 <section>
 <title>Install a new pointer theme</title>
@@ -72,13 +85,27 @@ and install a different pointer theme from the web.
  </item>
  <item>
   <p>
-  Click <guiseq><gui>System</gui><gui>Preferences</gui><gui>Appearance</gui></guiseq> 
-  and select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
+  Click
+  <guiseq><gui> Alt </gui><gui> F1 </gui></guiseq> or the Meta key, or touch the pointer to the top left corner (a.k.a. the "hot corner") to enter the <gui> Activities </gui> overview.
   </p>
  </item>
  <item>
+ <p>
+ Type 'Appearance'. 
+ </p>
+ <p>
+ Click on the <gui> Appearance </gui> icon to open.
+ </p>
+ <p>
+  Select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
+ </p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+  <p>
+  Click <gui>Install</gui>.
   <p>
-  Click <gui>Install</gui>, navigate to the theme file, select it, and 
+  </p>
+  Navigate to the theme file, select it, and 
   click <gui>Open</gui>.
   </p>
  </item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page
index 0557a4e..c3ae284 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-disabletouchpad.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     Disable the touchpad permanently, or just when you plug-in a mouse.
     </desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-22" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-22" status="outdated"/>
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
         <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sound.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sound.page
index 9dbfbd2..52cca2b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sound.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sound.page
@@ -5,13 +5,15 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse#style"/>
     
     <desc>
-    Play a sound when a button is clicked.
+    Play a sound when mouse is clicked.
     </desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-09-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-25" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
         <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
+        <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+        <email>tiffany.antopolski@gmail.com</email>
     </credit>
     <copyright>
         <year>2009</year>
@@ -21,17 +23,32 @@
     <!-- <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> -->
 </info>
 
-<title>Make a sound when the mouse is clicked</title>
+<title>Change Mouse Sound Setting</title>
 
 <steps>
+<item>
+  <p>
+  Click <guiseq><gui> Alt </gui><gui> F1 </gui></guiseq> or the Meta key, or touch the pointer to the top left corner (a.k.a. the "hot corner") to enter the <gui> Activities </gui> overview.
+  </p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>
+ Type 'sound'.
+ </p>
+ <p> 
+ Click on the <gui> Sound </gui> icon under <gui> Preferences </gui>.
+ </p>
+ </item>
+
  <item>
   <p>
-  Click <guiseq><gui>System</gui><gui>Preferences</gui><gui>Sound</gui></guiseq> 
-  and select the <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab.
+  Select the <gui> Sound Effects </gui> tab in the <gui> Sound Preferences </gui> window.
   </p>
  </item>
  <item>
+
   <p>
+You can change which sound is made by changing the <gui>Sound Theme</gui>.
   Choose a <gui>Sound Theme</gui> other than <gui>No sounds</gui>.
   </p>
  </item>
@@ -42,18 +59,14 @@
  </item>
  <item>
   <p>
-  Make sure that the <gui>Alert volume</gui> is turned up and that 
-  <gui>Mute</gui> is not checked.
+  Make sure that the <gui> Alert volume </gui> and <gui> Output volume </gui> are turned up and that 
+  <gui> Mute </gui> is not checked.
   </p>
  </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>
+ Click <gui> Close</gui>.
+ </p>
+ </item>
 </steps>
-
-<p>
-A short sound will be played whenever you click a button on the screen.
-</p>
-
-<p>
-You can change which sound is made by changing the <gui>Sound Theme</gui>.
-</p>
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse.page
index 07ab576..4efb12b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="guide"
       id="mouse">
 <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-22" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-25" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#mouse" />
     
     <credit type="author">
@@ -20,11 +20,11 @@
 <title>Mouse settings</title>
 
 <section id="style" style="2column">
-    <title>Change how the pointer looks or sounds</title>
+    <title>Change Pointer Appearance and Behaviour</title>
 </section>
 
 <section id="behavior" style="2column">
-    <title>Change how your mouse behaves</title>
+    <title>Change Mouse Behaviour</title>
 </section>
 
 <section id="problems" style="2column">