Changed Sec 1.2 to Virt Resources; various edits throughout

6 files changed, 80 insertions, 488 deletions

diff --git a/en-US/Advantages.xml b/en-US/Advantages.xml
index ea5df7b..54d6bed 100644
--- a/en-US/Advantages.xml
+++ b/en-US/Advantages.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 		<title>Virtualization costs</title>
 		
 		<para>
-                  A common misconception is that virtualization is too expensive to justify the change.<!--The conversion? Reword- confusing sentence.--> Virtualization can be expensive to introduce but often it saves money in the long term. It is important to perform a Return on Investment (ROI) analysis to determine the best use of virtualization in your environment. Consider the following benefits:
+                  A common misconception is that virtualization is too expensive to justify the change. Virtualization can be expensive to introduce but often it saves money in the long term. It is important to perform a Return on Investment (ROI) analysis to determine the best use of virtualization in your environment. Consider the following benefits:
 		</para>
 		
 		<variablelist>
@@ -51,16 +51,7 @@
 					</para>
 				</listitem>
 			      </varlistentry>-->
-			 
 			
-			<!--<varlistentry>
-				<term>Predictable costs</term>
-				<listitem>
-					<para>
-					A Red Hat Enterprise Linux subscription provides support for virtualization at the normal fixed rate, making it easy to predict costs.
-					</para>
-				</listitem>
-			</varlistentry>-->
 			
 			<varlistentry>
 			  <term>Less space</term>
@@ -106,7 +97,7 @@
 		
 		<para>
 		  <!--While virtualized systems require a host for operations, this host is usually bare metal with few, if any network services. The host supporting virtualized machines requires few, if any, network services. This means that it is very secure and need only to set up Secure Shell (SSH) manually. This section will include an overview of the security available. -->
-		  A virtual machine uses SELinux <!--and sVirt--> to improve security in virtualization. This section includes an overview of the security options available.
+		  A virtual machine uses SELinux and sVirt to improve security in virtualization. This section includes an overview of the security options available.
 		</para>
 		
 		<section>
@@ -121,11 +112,11 @@
 		  <para>For more information on SELinux, refer to the SELinux documentation at <ulink url="http://docs.redhat.com/docs/" />. For more information on security within virtualization, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Virtualization Security Guide</citetitle>.
 		  </para>
 		</note>-->
-		<!--	IS SVIRT PART OF FEDORA? <formalpara>
+		<formalpara>
 				<title>sVirt</title>
-				<para>sVirt is a technology included in Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6 that integrates SELinux and virtualization. It applies Mandatory Access Control (MAC) to improve security when using virtual machines, and improves security and hardens the system against bugs in the hypervisor that might be used as an attack vector for the host or to another virtual machine.</para>
+				<para>sVirt is a technology included in Fedora that integrates SELinux and virtualization. It applies Mandatory Access Control (MAC) to improve security when using virtual machines, and improves security and hardens the system against bugs in the hypervisor that might be used as an attack vector for the host or to another virtual machine.</para>
 			</formalpara>
-	<note><para>For more information on sVirt, refer to the <citetitle>Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6 Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>.</para></note>-->
+	<note><para>For more information on sVirt, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>.</para></note>
 		</section>
 		
 	</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Author_Group.xml b/en-US/Author_Group.xml
index 00a1e36..5ed9546 100644
--- a/en-US/Author_Group.xml
+++ b/en-US/Author_Group.xml
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
 <authorgroup>
 	<author>
 		<affiliation>
-			<orgname>Red Hat</orgname>
-			<orgdiv>Engineering Content Services</orgdiv>
+			<orgname>Fedora</orgname>
+			<orgdiv>Documentation Project</orgdiv>
 		</affiliation>
 	</author>
 </authorgroup>
diff --git a/en-US/Introduction.xml b/en-US/Introduction.xml
index 9c1e030..7b64f7e 100644
--- a/en-US/Introduction.xml
+++ b/en-US/Introduction.xml
@@ -60,27 +60,35 @@
 	<para>
          In addition to the documentation for Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization products and this guide, the following titles cover virtualization with Fedora:
 	</para>-->
-           <title>Virtualization Resources</title>
+           <title>Virtualization resources</title>
            <para>
-            In addition to <!--the documentation for Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization products and--> this guide, the following titles cover virtualization with Fedora:
+              Fedora contains packages and tools to support a variety of virtualized environments. Fedora virtualization provides the upstream development for virtualization in Red Hat Enterprise Linux. Refer to <xref linkend="chap-Virtualization_Getting_Started-Products"/> for more information about the virtualization products available in Fedora.
+           </para>
+           <para>
+               In addition to this guide, the following books cover virtualization with Fedora: 
             </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-	<listitem>      
-	  <para> <!--Check desciptions are accurate for Fedora, with other authors-->
-	  <citetitle>Virtualization Deployment Guide</citetitle>: This guide provides information on system requirements and restrictions, package details, host configuration and detailed instructions for installing different types of guests. 
-	</para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  <citetitle>Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>: This guide provides information on best server practices, security, KVM, remote management of guests, KSM, administration tasks, storage, volumes, <application>virt-manager</application>, guest disk access with offline tools, virtual networking, and troubleshooting.
-	</para>
-      </listitem>
-            <listitem>
-        <para>
-          <citetitle>Virtualization Security Guide</citetitle>: This guide provides information on virtualization security technologies including sVirt, configuration and best practices for host and guest security, and network security. 
-          <!--IS THIS A GOOD DESCRIPTION? get sradvan to review. .... best server practices, security, KVM, remote management of guests, KSM, administration tasks, storage, volumes, <application>virt-manager</application>, guest disk access with offline tools, virtual networking, and troubleshooting.-->
-        </para>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
+            <itemizedlist>
+               <listitem>      
+                     <para>
+                        <citetitle>Virtualization Deployment Guide</citetitle>: This guide provides information on system requirements and restrictions, package details, host configuration and detailed instructions for installing different types of guests. 
+                     </para>
+               </listitem>
+               <listitem>
+                     <para>
+                        <citetitle>Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>: This guide provides information on servers, security, KVM, remote management of guests, KSM, administration tasks, storage, volumes, <application>virt-manager</application>, guest disk access with offline tools, virtual networking, and troubleshooting.
+                     </para>
+               </listitem>
+               <listitem>
+                     <para>
+                        <citetitle>Virtualization Security Guide</citetitle>: This guide provides information on virtualization security technologies including sVirt, configuration and recommendations for host and guest security, and network security. 
+                     </para>
+               </listitem>
+            </itemizedlist>
+         <para>
+            Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization (RHEV) is another virtualization option for servers and desktops. Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization provides an end-to-end datacenter virtualization solution developed from the upstream oVirt project. Visit <ulink url="https://fedorahosted.org/ovirt/"/> for more information about oVirt. 
+         </para>
+         <para>
+            Documentation for Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization and virtualization with Red Hat Enterprise Linux can be found at <ulink url="http://docs.redhat.com/"/>.
+         </para>      
     </section>
   </chapter>
diff --git a/en-US/Products.xml b/en-US/Products.xml
index bdbbdc3..9aeaeaa 100644
--- a/en-US/Products.xml
+++ b/en-US/Products.xml
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
                                  <para>
                                        To verify whether your processor supports the virtualization extensions and for information on enabling the virtualization extensions if they are disabled, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Virtualization Administration Guide.</citetitle>
                                  </para>
-         <!--<para>
+         <!-- REMOVED AS THERE IS NO FEDORA SUPPORT MATRIX. <para>
         Fedora servers have certain support limits.
         </para>
         <para> Is there a corresponding matrix for Fedora?
@@ -105,10 +105,10 @@
 		</listitem>
 	</itemizedlist>	
 	<para>
-           The <package>libvirt</package> package is designed as a building block for higher level management tools and applications, for example, <command>virt-manager</command> and the <command>virsh</command> command line management tools. With the exception of migration capabilities, <application>libvirt</application> focuses on managing single hosts and provides APIs to enumerate, monitor and use the resources available on the managed node, including CPUs, memory, storage, networking and Non-Uniform Memory Access (NUMA) partitions. The management tools can be located on separate physical machines from the host using secure protocols.
+           The <package>libvirt</package> package is designed as a building block for higher level management tools and applications, for example, <command>virt-manager</command> and the <command>virsh</command> command-line management tools. With the exception of migration capabilities, <application>libvirt</application> focuses on managing single hosts and provides APIs to enumerate, monitor and use the resources available on the managed node, including CPUs, memory, storage, networking and Non-Uniform Memory Access (NUMA) partitions. The management tools can be located on separate physical machines from the host using secure protocols.
         </para>
         <para>
-           Fedora supports <application>libvirt</application> and included <application>libvirt</application>-based tools as its default method for virtualization management<!-- (as in Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Management)-->.
+           Fedora supports <application>libvirt</application> and included <application>libvirt</application>-based tools as its default method for virtualization management.
         </para>
         <para>
            The <package>libvirt</package> package is available as free software under the GNU Lesser General Public License. The <package>libvirt</package> project aims to provide a long term stable C API to virtualization management tools, running on top of varying hypervisor technologies. <!--The <package>libvirt</package> package supports Xen on Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;5, and it supports KVM on both Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;5 and Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.-->
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
             </variablelist>
                <note>
                      <para>
-                              For more information on <command>virt-manager</command>, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>.
+                        For more information on <command>virsh</command> and <application>virt-manager</application>, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>.
                      </para>
                   </note>
 </section>
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@
                <itemizedlist>
                      <listitem>
                               <para>
-                                 Virtualized and emulated software devices <!--(was: Emulated software devices - is this correct? hardware/software?)-->
+                                 Virtualized and emulated devices
                               </para>
                      </listitem>
                      <listitem>
@@ -230,13 +230,13 @@
                                     </itemizedlist>
                              </listitem>
                            </varlistentry>
-<!--                           <varlistentry> What is the Fedora equivalent for all of this?
-                              <term>Emulated sound devices</term>
+                           <varlistentry> 
+                              <term>Emulated sound devices</term>  <!--What is the Fedora equivalent for all of this?-->
                               <listitem>
-                                    <para>
-                                       Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.1 and above provides an emulated (Intel) HDA sound device, <systemitem>intel-hda</systemitem>. This device is supported on the following guest operating systems:
+                                    <para> <!--FIX THIS PART! VERIFY WITH SMEs-->
+                                       <!--Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.1 and above--> Fedora&nbsp;18 provides an emulated (Intel) HDA sound device, <systemitem>intel-hda</systemitem>. <!--This device is supported on the following guest operating systems:-->
                                     </para>
-                                    <itemizedlist>
+                                    <!--<itemizedlist>
                                           <listitem>
                                              <para>
                                                 Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6, for i386 and x86_64 architectures
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
                                                 Windows 2008 R2, for the x86_64 architecture
                                              </para>
                                           </listitem>
-                                    </itemizedlist>
+                                    </itemizedlist>-->
                                     <para>
                                        The following two emulated sound devices are also available, but are not recommended due to compatibility issues with certain guest operating systems:
                                     </para>
@@ -275,12 +275,13 @@
                                           </listitem>
                                     </itemizedlist>
                              </listitem>
-                           </varlistentry>-->
- <!--                          <varlistentry> What is the Fedora equivalent?
-                              <term>Emulated watchdog devices</term>
+                           </varlistentry>
+                        
+                           <varlistentry> 
+                           <term>Emulated watchdog devices</term>                              <!-- Verify for Fedora with SMEs! Removed questionable bits for now. -->
                               <listitem>
                                     <para>
-                                       Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.0 and above provides two emulated watchdog devices. A watchdog can be used to automatically reboot a virtual machine when it becomes overloaded or unresponsive.
+                                       <!--Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.0 and above--> Fedora&nbsp;18 provides two emulated watchdog devices. A watchdog can be used to automatically reboot a virtual machine when it becomes overloaded or unresponsive.
                                     </para>
                                     <para>
                                        The <package>watchdog</package> package must be installed on the guest. 
@@ -291,20 +292,20 @@
                                     <itemizedlist>
                                           <listitem>
                                              <para>
-                                                <systemitem>i6300esb</systemitem>, an emulated Intel 6300 ESB PCI watchdog device. It is supported in guest operating system Red Hat Enterprise Linux versions 6.0 and above, and is the recommended device to use.
+                                                <systemitem>i6300esb</systemitem>, an emulated Intel 6300 ESB PCI watchdog device. <!--It is supported in guest operating system Red Hat Enterprise Linux versions 6.0 and above, and is the recommended device to use.-->
                                              </para>
                                           </listitem>
                                           <listitem>
                                              <para>
-                                                <systemitem>ib700</systemitem>, an emulated iBase 700 ISA watchdog device. The <systemitem>ib700</systemitem> watchdog device is only supported in guests using Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.2 and above.
+                                                <systemitem>ib700</systemitem>, an emulated iBase 700 ISA watchdog device. <!--The <systemitem>ib700</systemitem> watchdog device is only supported in guests using Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.2 and above.-->
                                              </para>
                                           </listitem>
                                     </itemizedlist>
-                                    <para>
+                                   <!-- <para>
                                        Both watchdog devices are supported in i386 and x86_64 architectures for guest operating systems Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.2 and above.
-                                    </para>
+                                    </para>-->
                               </listitem>
-                           </varlistentry>-->
+                           </varlistentry>
                            <varlistentry>
                               <term>Emulated network devices</term>
                               <listitem>
@@ -368,7 +369,7 @@
                         </para>
                         <variablelist>
                            <varlistentry>
-                              <term>Para-virtualized network driver (virtio-net)</term>
+                              <term>The para-virtualized network driver (virtio-net)</term>
                               <listitem>
                                     <para>
                                        The para-virtualized network driver <!--is a Red Hat branded virtual network device. It--> can be used as the driver for existing network devices or new network devices for virtual machines.
@@ -376,7 +377,7 @@
                               </listitem>
                            </varlistentry>
                            <varlistentry>
-                              <term>Para-virtualized block driver (virtio-blk)</term>
+                              <term>The para-virtualized block driver (virtio-blk)</term>
                               <listitem>
                                     <para>
                                        The para-virtualized block driver is a driver for all storage devices, is supported  by the hypervisor, and is attached to the virtual machine (except for floppy disk drives, which must be emulated).
@@ -419,7 +420,7 @@
                               <term>PCI device assignment</term>
                               <listitem>
                                     <para>
-                                       The KVM hypervisor supports attaching PCI devices on the host system to virtual machines. PCI device assignment allows guests to have exclusive access to PCI devices for a range of tasks. It allows PCI devices to appear and behave as if they were physically attached to the guest operating system.
+                                       The KVM hypervisor supports attaching PCI devices on the host system to virtual machines. PCI device assignment allows guests to have exclusive access to PCI devices for a range of tasks. It allows PCI devices to appear and behave as if they were physically attached to the guest virtual machine.
                                     </para>
                                     <para>
                                        Device assignment is supported on PCI Express devices, with the exception of graphics cards. Parallel PCI devices may be supported as assigned devices, but they have severe limitations due to security and system configuration conflicts.
@@ -497,13 +498,19 @@
             of current processor models are now included by default, allowing users to specify 
             features more accurately and migrate more safely.
          </para>
-
-         <para>
+            <note>
+               <para>
+                  For more information on guest CPU models, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Virtualization Deployment Guide</citetitle>.
+               </para>
+            </note>
+         
+         
+ <!--      REMOVE FROM THIS GUIDE - NEEDS TO GO INTO THE VIRT DEPLOYMENT GUIDE  <para>
             A list of supported CPU models can be viewed with the
             <command>/usr/libexec/qemu-kvm -cpu ?model</command> command. This command outputs
             the <parameter>name</parameter> used to select the CPU model at the command line,
             and a model identifier that corresponds to a commercial instance of that processor
-            class. <!--The CPU models that Red Hat Enterprise Linux supports can be found in the <citetitle>qemu-kvm Whitelist</citetitle> chapter in the <citetitle>Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>.-->
+            class. The CPU models that Red Hat Enterprise Linux supports can be found in the <citetitle>qemu-kvm Whitelist</citetitle> chapter in the <citetitle>Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>.
             </para>
 
          <para>
@@ -562,7 +569,7 @@ warning: host cpuid 0000_0001 lacks requested flag 'popcnt' [0x00800000]</screen
             <para>
                If a defined feature is not available, those features will fail silently
                by default.
-            </para>
+            </para> -->
     <!--Use the <code>enforce</code> flag to force QEMU to exit in error
       when an explicit or implicit feature flag is not supported:
    </para>
@@ -605,7 +612,7 @@ warning: host cpuid 0000_0001 lacks requested flag 'popcnt' [0x00800000]
                      <section>
                               <title>Storage Volumes</title>
                                     <para>                      
-                                       Storage pools are further divided into storage volumes. Storage volumes are an abstraction of physical partitions, LVM logical volumes, file-based disk images and other storage types handled by <application>libvirt</application>. Storage volumes are presented to virtualized guests as local storage devices regardless of the underlying hardware.
+                                       Storage pools are further divided into storage volumes. Storage volumes are an abstraction of physical partitions, LVM logical volumes, file-based disk images and other storage types handled by <application>libvirt</application>. Storage volumes are presented to virtual machines as local storage devices regardless of the underlying hardware.
                                     </para>
 
             <note>
diff --git a/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
index f134d8a..25cd673 100644
--- a/en-US/Revision_History.xml
+++ b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
 		<revhistory>
 			<!--EDIT MY REVNUMBER AND DESCRIPTION AT RELEASE TIME FOR MAJOR REVISION-->
 			<revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-83</revnumber>
-                                <date>Mon June 18 2012</date>
+                                <revnumber>1.0-01</revnumber>
+                                <date>Tuesday August 14 2012</date>
                                 <author>
                                         <firstname>Dayle</firstname>
                                         <surname>Parker</surname>
@@ -18,424 +18,10 @@
                                 </author>
                                 <revdescription>
                                         <simplelist>
-					  <member>Version for 6.3 GA release</member>
+					  <member>Initial creation of book for Fedora.</member>
                                         </simplelist>
                                 </revdescription>
                         </revision>
-			<revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-82</revnumber>
-                                <date>Mon June 18 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Dayle</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Parker</surname>
-                                        <email>dayleparker@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-					  <member>Corrected "64 vCPUs" to "160 vCPUs" for <ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=832415">BZ#832415</ulink>.</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-			<revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-80</revnumber>
-                                <date>Tues June 12 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Dayle</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Parker</surname>
-                                        <email>dayleparker@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-					  <member>Clarified emulated watchdog device section for <ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=827307">BZ#827307</ulink>.</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-			<revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-78</revnumber>
-                                <date>Fri June 8 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Dayle</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Parker</surname>
-                                        <email>dayleparker@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-					  <member>Corrected typos and markup for <ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=827305">BZ#827305</ulink>.</member>
-					  <member>General corrections made to Chapter 4 <ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=827307">BZ#827307</ulink>.</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-			<revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-73</revnumber>
-                                <date>Mon 23 April 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Laura</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Novich</surname>
-                                        <email>lnovich@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-					  <member>Corrections made to chapter 5 (BZ#798108).</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-                        <revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-72</revnumber>
-                                <date>Mon 23 April 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Laura</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Novich</surname>
-                                        <email>lnovich@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-					  <member>Corrections made to chapter 4 (BZ#798106).</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-                        <revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-71</revnumber>
-                                <date>Thur 19 April 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Laura</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Novich</surname>
-                                        <email>lnovich@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-					  <member>Corrections made to chapter 5 (BZ#798108).</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-                        <revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-69</revnumber>
-                                <date>Wed 18 April 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Laura</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Novich</surname>
-                                        <email>lnovich@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-					  <member>Corrections made to chapter 4 (BZ#798106).</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-                        <revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-68</revnumber>
-                                <date>Tue 17 April 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Dayle</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Parker</surname>
-                                        <email>dayleparker@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-					  <member>Corrected terminology to "virtual machine" where needed (<ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=798063">BZ#798063</ulink>).</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-			<revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-64</revnumber>
-                                <date>Mon 2 April 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Laura</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Novich</surname>
-                                        <email>lnovich@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>BZ#800401 Corrections to Chapter 2</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-                        <revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-61</revnumber>
-                                <date>Fri 30 March 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Dayle</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Parker</surname>
-                                        <email>dayleparker@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-					  <member>Made corrections in Chapter 3: Advantages (<ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=800409">BZ#800409</ulink>).</member>
-					  <member>Adjusted terms to "virtual machine" and "virtualized guest" where appropriate; corrected outdated link in 4.1; corrected terms in Emulated network devices (from drivers) in (<ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=798063">BZ#798063</ulink>).</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-			<revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-52</revnumber>
-                                <date>Wed 11 January 2012</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-                                        <email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>BZ#772859 clarified acronym.</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
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-                                <date>Fri 04 November 2011</date>
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-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-                                        <email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
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-                                <date>Fri 14 October 2011</date>
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-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-                                        <email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
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-                                                <member>BZ#744156 add paragraph about emulated watchdogs.</member>
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-                                <date>Sun 18 September 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Scott</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Radvan</surname>
-                                        <email>sradvan@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
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-                                <date>Fri 16 September 2011</date>
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-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
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-                                <revnumber>0.2-43</revnumber>
-                                <date>Fri 16 September 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
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-                                <revnumber>0.2-37</revnumber>
-                                <date>Fri 2 September 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
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-                        </revision>
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-                                <revnumber>0.2-34</revnumber>
-                                <date>Thu 1 September 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>BZ#734619, BZ#734511, BZ#734618, BZ#734616, BZ#715476, BZ#734613</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
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-                                <revnumber>0.2-33</revnumber>
-                                <date>Wed 31 August 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>BZ#734618, BZ#734613, BZ#734619</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
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-				<revnumber>0.2-34</revnumber>
-				<date>Thu 25 August 2011</date>
-				<author>
-					<firstname>Scott</firstname>
-					<surname>Radvan</surname>
-					<email>sradvan@redhat.com</email>
-				</author>
-				<revdescription>
-					<simplelist>
-						<member>6.2 development.</member>
-					</simplelist>
-				</revdescription>
-                        </revision>
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-                                <revnumber>0.2-24</revnumber>
-                                <date>Fri July 29 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>Extensive edits, combine security section into advantages</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
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-                                <revnumber>0.2-22</revnumber>
-                                <date>Wed July 27 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>Advantages chapter completed BZ#715476</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
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-			<revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-20</revnumber>
-                                <date>Tue July 26 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>More of the Advantages draft</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-			
-			<revision>
-                                <revnumber>0.2-17</revnumber>
-                                <date>Mon July 25 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>Minor edits for BZ#715473 and BZ#715474</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
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-                                <revnumber>0.2-15</revnumber>
-                                <date>Mon July 25 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>Chapter 4 draft BZ#715476</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
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-                                <revnumber>0.2-4</revnumber>
-                                <date>Thu June 23 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Jacquelynn</firstname>
-                                        <surname>East</surname>
-					<email>jeast@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>Completed chapter 1</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
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-                                <revnumber>0.1-01</revnumber>
-                                <date>Wed May 4 2011</date>
-                                <author>
-                                        <firstname>Scott</firstname>
-                                        <surname>Radvan</surname>
-					<email>sradvan@redhat.com</email>
-                                </author>
-                                <revdescription>
-                                        <simplelist>
-                                                <member>Arrange basic layout and book infrastructure. Import introductory text.</member>
-                                        </simplelist>
-                                </revdescription>
-                        </revision>
-			<revision>
-				<revnumber>0.0-01</revnumber>
-				<date>Wed May 4 2011</date>
-				<author>
-					<firstname>Scott</firstname>
-					<surname>Radvan</surname>
-					<email>sradvan@redhat.com</email>
-				</author>
-				<revdescription>
-					<simplelist>
-						<member>Initial creation of book by Publican.</member>
-					</simplelist>
-				</revdescription>
-			</revision>
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 	</simpara>
-</appendix>
-
+</appendix>
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diff --git a/en-US/What_Is_It.xml b/en-US/What_Is_It.xml
index 743e799..b307d6c 100644
--- a/en-US/What_Is_It.xml
+++ b/en-US/What_Is_It.xml
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 	<section id="sec-what_is_virtualization">
 	<title>What is virtualization?</title>
                   <para>
-                     Virtualization is a broad computing term used for running software, usually multiple operating systems, concurrently and in isolation from other programs on a single system. Most existing implementations of virtualization use a <firstterm>hypervisor</firstterm>, a software layer or subsystem that controls hardware and provides <firstterm>guest</firstterm> operating systems with access to underlying hardware. The hypervisor allows multiple operating systems, called <firstterm>guests</firstterm>, to run on the same physical system by offering virtualized hardware to the guest operating system. There are various methods for virtualizing operating systems:
+                     Virtualization is a broad computing term used for running software, usually multiple operating systems, concurrently and in isolation from other programs on a single system. Most existing implementations of virtualization use a <firstterm>hypervisor</firstterm>, a software layer or subsystem that controls hardware and provides <firstterm>guest operating systems</firstterm> with access to underlying hardware. The hypervisor allows multiple operating systems, called <firstterm>guests</firstterm>, to run on the same physical system by offering virtualized hardware to the guest operating system. There are various methods for virtualizing operating systems:
                   </para>
                   <variablelist>
                      <varlistentry><term><emphasis role="strong">Full virtualization</emphasis></term>
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
                      <varlistentry><term><emphasis role="strong">Software virtualization (or emulation)</emphasis></term>
                         <listitem>
                               <para>
-                                 Software virtualization uses slower binary translation and other emulation techniques to run unmodified operating systems. Software virtualization is unsupported by Fedora. <!--Is this true for Fedora?-->
+                                 Software virtualization uses slower binary translation and other emulation techniques to run unmodified operating systems. <!--Software virtualization is unsupported by Fedora.  IS IT OR IS IT NOT?-->
                               </para>
                         </listitem>
                      </varlistentry>
@@ -94,14 +94,14 @@
                                              </listitem>
                                     </varlistentry>
                               </variablelist>
-    <!--                          <para> VERIFY: from Fedora 17? does this work the same way? Is Live Block Migration still in the Fedora Virt Admin Guide? Ask Laura N.
-                                 It is important to understand that the migration process moves the virtual machine's memory, and from Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.3, the disk volume associated with the virtual machine is also migrated. This process is done using Live Block Migration &mdash; information about this can be found in the <citetitle>Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6 Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>.
-                              </para>-->
+                              <para>
+                                 It is important to understand that the migration process moves the virtual machine's memory. <!--and from Red Hat Enterprise Linux&nbsp;6.3, the disk volume associated with the virtual machine is also migrated.--> This process is done using live migration.
+                              </para>
                               <para>
                                  Shared, networked storage must be used for storing guest images to be migrated. Without shared storage, migration is not possible. It is recommended to use <application>libvirt</application>-managed storage pools for shared storage.
                               </para>   
                               <para>
-                                 For more information on migration refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>.
+                                 For more information on migration, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Virtualization Administration Guide</citetitle>.
                               </para>
                      </section>
         </section>