From b3e8f644958f5033beebeb91edf11d5edf21c8c1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: ddomingo <ddomingo@redhat.com>
Date: Mon, 17 Nov 2008 13:04:02 +1000
Subject: revisions as per dsmith

---
 doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Array-Operations.xml | 14 +++++++++++---
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Array-Operations.xml')

diff --git a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Array-Operations.xml b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Array-Operations.xml
index 32fdf021..f63d1d70 100644
--- a/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Array-Operations.xml
+++ b/doc/SystemTap_Beginners_Guide/en-US/Array-Operations.xml
@@ -30,7 +30,12 @@ foo[execname()] = gettimeofday_s()
 </section>
 <section id="arrayops-readvalues">
 	<title>Reading Values From Arrays</title>
-	<para>You can also use the <command>=</command> operator to read values from an array. This is accomplished by simply including the <command><replaceable>array_name</replaceable>[<replaceable>index_expression</replaceable>]</command> as an element in a mathematical expression. For example:</para>
+	<para>You can also read values from an array the same way you would read the value of a variable. 
+	To do so, include the  
+	<command><replaceable>array_name</replaceable>[<replaceable>index_expression</replaceable>]</command> 
+	statement as an element in a mathematical expression. For example:</para>	
+<!--	
+	<para>You can also use the <command>=</command> operator to read values from an array. This is accomplished by simply including the <command><replaceable>array_name</replaceable>[<replaceable>index_expression</replaceable>]</command> as an element in a mathematical expression. For example:</para>-->
 
 <example id="arrayreadingvaluesfrom">
 	<title>Using Array Values in Simple Computations</title>
@@ -187,7 +192,9 @@ probe timer.s(2)
 	foreach (count in reads+) 
 		printf("%s : %d \n", count, reads[count])
 	if(reads["stapio"] >= 20)
-	{exit()}
+	{
+		exit()
+	}
 }
 </programlisting>
 </example>
@@ -221,7 +228,8 @@ probe timer.s(2)
 	foreach (count in reads+) 
 		printf("%s : %d \n", count, reads[count])
 	if(["stapio"] in reads)
-	{printf("stapio read detected, exiting\n")
+	{
+		printf("stapio read detected, exiting\n")
 		exit()
 	}
 }
-- 
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