From 8d48f9847c0a5b5c2c7650780bf0dd90d4e75608 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Phil Bull <philbull@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 19 Mar 2011 20:23:35 -0400
Subject: Review standards for session- pages

---
 gnome-help/C/session-loginsound.page | 9 ++++++---
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'gnome-help/C/session-loginsound.page')

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-loginsound.page b/gnome-help/C/session-loginsound.page
index 08e5c21..d54e930 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-loginsound.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-loginsound.page
@@ -1,12 +1,15 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
       type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="session-loginsound">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs#sound"/>
-    <desc></desc>
+    <desc>XXXXX</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-15" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <!-- Can you do this any more? Is there even a login sound? -->
+    
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
@@ -15,7 +18,7 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Disable or Change Login Sound</title>
+  <title>Disable or change the login sound</title>
   <p>
    When you login to your system, a default login sound is played.  You can easily disable it, or even change it to your favorite sound.
   </p>  
-- 
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