From 9065b4ea2c967899038a3b7859b4a8d344d69961 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Phil Bull <philbull@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 19 Mar 2011 20:43:52 -0400
Subject: Review standards for misc. pages, fix validation errors in power-
 topics

---
 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'gnome-help/C/clock-set.page')

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index bc4071c..d3fc762 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -1,11 +1,12 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-      type="topic" style="task"
+      type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="clock-set">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#clock"/>
-    <desc>Set the time and date.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-10-31" status="draft"/>
+    <desc>Update the time/date displayed at the top of the screen.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
@@ -14,7 +15,7 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Change the time</title>
+<title>Change the time and date</title>
 <p> To adjust the Time and Date just click on the Clock, sited in the Panel and select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p>
 <p>Once you are there, click on <gui>Unlock</gui> and introduce your password so you will be able to:</p> 
 <list>
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