From 05cd8667e2e6115cc757d1ad31f062084674387f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany@antopolski.com>
Date: Sat, 26 Feb 2011 05:13:02 -0500
Subject: [g-h]backup pages ready for review

---
 gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page | 8 +++++---
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page')

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
index e0e9614..b861737 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
@@ -4,8 +4,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#backup"/>
     <desc>Important considerations when backing up data.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany.antopolski@gmail.com</email>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
     </credit>
@@ -22,7 +24,7 @@ Deciding what files to backup and finding where they all are is the most difficu
 <terms>
 <item>
    <title>Your Personal Files and Settings</title>
-<p>These are usually stored in your home folder (<cmd>/home/your_name</cmd>). They could be in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music, Videos and/or .evolution. If your backup medium has sufficient space, consider backing up the entire <cmd>/home</cmd> folder. This is the simplest way.</p>
+<p>These are usually stored in your Home folder (<cmd>/home/your_name</cmd>). They could be in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music, Videos and/or .evolution. If your backup medium has sufficient space, consider backing up the entire <cmd>/home</cmd> folder. This is the simplest way.</p>
 
 <p>
       If you are not able to backup all of <cmd>/home</cmd>, see below for a list of some subfolders of the <cmd>/home</cmd> directory to check for important files.
@@ -31,7 +33,7 @@ Deciding what files to backup and finding where they all are is the most difficu
 <list>
 <item><p><cmd>~/</cmd> represents your home directory <cmd>/home/your_name</cmd> </p></item>
 
- <item><p>any file or folder name that starts with a period is by default hidden. To view these  select <gui>View</gui> from the main menu, then select <gui>Show Hidden Files</gui> or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>.
+ <item><p>Any file or folder name that starts with a period is by default hidden. To view hidden files select <gui>View</gui> from the main menu, then select <gui>Show Hidden Files</gui> or press <keyseq><key> Ctrl </key><key> H </key></keyseq>.
 </p></item>
 </list>
 </note>
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