From 05cd8667e2e6115cc757d1ad31f062084674387f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany@antopolski.com>
Date: Sat, 26 Feb 2011 05:13:02 -0500
Subject: [g-h]backup pages ready for review

---
 gnome-help/C/backup-how.page | 8 +++++---
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'gnome-help/C/backup-how.page')

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
index 1fb653e..4dac7f0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
@@ -4,8 +4,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup"/>
     <title type="sort">d</title>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany.antopolski@gmail.com</email>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
     </credit>
@@ -24,7 +26,7 @@ If you have the room, it is best to backup the entire home directory with the fo
 
 <list>
  <item><p>Files that you have copied from a CD, DVD, or other removable media, since it would be faster to copy them again than to restore them from backup.</p></item>
- <item><p>Files that you can generate easily. For example, PDF's that can be generated from TeX files, or object files that can be made with make.  Just make sure the source is backed up.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Files that you can generate easily. For example, PDF's that can be generated from TeX files, or object files that can be made with the Make utility.  Just ensure the source is backed up.</p></item>
  <item><p>Your trashed files, which can be found in <cmd>~/.local/share/Trash</cmd></p></item>
 </list>
 
@@ -36,7 +38,7 @@ The amount of data you can backup is limited by the size of the storage device.
    </p>
    <note style="tip">
    <p> <media type="image" src = "deja-dup.png"/>
-   Alternatively, you can use an app that can back your files up for you.  </p><p>  One such app is <app>Déjà Dup</app>.  It is very simply and intuitive to use, and it hides the complexity of doing backups regularly, off-site and encrypted. 
+   Alternatively, you can use an app that can back your files up for you.  </p><p>  One such app is <app>Déjà Dup</app>.  It is very simply and intuitive to use, and it hides the complexity of doing backups regularly, off-site and encrypted.
 </p>
 <p>
  The <app>Déjà Dup</app> help will walk you through setting your preferences for the backup, as well as how to restore your data from the backup.
-- 
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