[g]h]updated mouse appearance pages.

3 files changed, 56 insertions, 28 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-size.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-size.page
index 69b83f7..c9129f6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-size.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-size.page
@@ -2,14 +2,13 @@
   type="topic"
   id="mouse-cursor-size">
 <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="mouse#style"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="mouse-appearance"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#vision" group="lowvision"/>
     
-    <desc>
-    Make the pointer bigger or smaller
+    <desc>Change the size of the pointer (cursor).
     </desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-22" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2009-08-22" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
         <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
@@ -22,16 +21,27 @@
     <!-- <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> -->
 </info>
 
-<title>Change the size of the pointer</title>
+<title>Cursor size</title>
 
 <steps>
- <item>
+  <item>
   <p>
-  Click <guiseq><gui>System</gui><gui>Preferences</gui>
-  <gui>Appearance</gui></guiseq> and select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
+  Click <guiseq><gui>Alt</gui><gui>F1</gui></guiseq> or the Meta key, or touch the pointer to the top left corner (a.k.a. the "hot corner") to enter the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.
   </p>
  </item>
  <item>
+ <p>
+ Type <input>appearance</input>.
+ </p>
+ <p> 
+ Click on the <gui>Appearance</gui> icon to open.
+ </p>
+  <p>
+ Select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
+ </p>
+
+ </item>
+ <item>
   <p>
   Click <gui>Customize</gui> and click the <gui>Pointer</gui> tab.
   </p>
@@ -41,11 +51,15 @@
   Change the size using the slider at the bottom of the window.
   </p>
  </item>
+ <item><p>
+ Click <gui>Close</gui> on the <gui>Customize Theme</gui> window and the <gui>Appearance Preferences</gui>.
+ </p></item>
 </steps>
 
+<note>
 <p>
 Some pointers cannot be resized because of the way they are designed. 
-Select a different pointer and see if you can resize that instead.
+You can select a different pointer and see if you can resize that instead.
 </p>
-
+</note>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-style.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-style.page
index 36e10f0..f71ef90 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-style.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-cursor-style.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
   type="topic"
   id="mouse-cursor-style">
 <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="mouse#style"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="mouse-appearance"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="mouse-problem-themeerror"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#vision" group="lowvision"/>
     
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     Change the color and style of the pointer.
     </desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
         <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
@@ -22,23 +22,22 @@
         <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
     </copyright>
     <license>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</license>
-    <!-- <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> -->
 </info>
 
-<title>Change Pointer Style</title>
+<title>Cursor Style</title>
 
 <steps>
  <item>
   <p>
-  Click <guiseq><gui> Alt </gui><gui> F1 </gui></guiseq> or the Meta key, or touch the pointer to the top left corner (a.k.a. the "hot corner") to enter the <gui> Activities </gui> overview.
+  Click <guiseq><gui>Alt</gui><gui>F1</gui></guiseq> or the Meta key, or touch the pointer to the top left corner (a.k.a. the "hot corner") to enter the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.
   </p>
  </item>
  <item>
  <p>
- Type 'appearance'.
+ Type <input>appearance</input>.
  </p>
  <p> 
- Click on the <gui> Appearance </gui> icon to open.
+ Click on the <gui>Appearance</gui> icon to open.
  </p>
  <p>
  Select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
@@ -73,7 +72,7 @@ and install a different pointer theme from the web.
 <steps>
  <item>
   <p>
-  Visit <link href="http://www.gnome-look.org/">GNOME-Look.org</link> and 
+  Visit <link href="http://gnome-look.org"/> and 
   click the <gui>X11 Mouse Themes</gui> link.
   </p>
  </item>
@@ -91,10 +90,10 @@ and install a different pointer theme from the web.
  </item>
  <item>
  <p>
- Type 'Appearance'. 
+ Type <input>Appearance</input>. 
  </p>
  <p>
- Click on the <gui> Appearance </gui> icon to open.
+ Click on the <gui>Appearance</gui> icon to open.
  </p>
  <p>
   Select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-highlightcolor.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-highlightcolor.page
index 393035f..8c101b3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-highlightcolor.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-highlightcolor.page
@@ -2,13 +2,13 @@
   type="topic"
   id="mouse-highlightcolor">
 <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="mouse#style"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="mouse-appearance"/>
     
     <desc>
-    Change the background color of text which has been selected with the mouse.
+    Change the color of highlighted text.
     </desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2010-08-23" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-11" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
         <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
@@ -21,17 +21,27 @@
     <!-- <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> -->
 </info>
 
-<title>Change the color of highlighted text</title>
+<title>Highlight Color</title>
 
 <steps>
  <item>
   <p>
-  Click 
-  <guiseq><gui>System</gui><gui>Preferences</gui><gui>Appearance</gui></guiseq> 
-  and select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
+  Click <guiseq><gui>Alt</gui><gui>F1</gui></guiseq> or the Meta key, or touch the pointer to the top left corner (a.k.a. the "hot corner") to enter the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.
   </p>
  </item>
  <item>
+ <p>
+ Type <input>appearance</input>.
+ </p>
+ <p> 
+ Click on the <gui>Appearance</gui> icon to open.
+ </p>
+  <p>
+ Select the <gui>Theme</gui> tab.
+ </p>
+ </item>
+
+ <item>
   <p>
   Click <gui>Customize</gui> and select the <gui>Colors</gui> tab.
   </p>
@@ -44,9 +54,14 @@
  </item>
  <item>
   <p>
-  Choose a color and click <gui>OK</gui>.
+  Pick a color and click <gui>OK</gui>.
   </p>
  </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>
+ Click <gui>Close</gui>.
+ </p>
+ </item>
 </steps>
 
 <p>