Review standards for session- pages

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-language.page b/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
index 2db4579..78f9b2a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
@@ -1,11 +1,12 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
-      type="topic" style="task"
+      type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="session-language">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs#session"/>
-    <desc>Switch language at login.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-25" status="candidate"/>
+    <desc>Switch to using a different language for text on the screen.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="incomplete"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
@@ -14,7 +15,7 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Change language</title>
+<title>Change language</title>
   <note style="important">
   <p>
   In order to be able to switch between languages on the login screen, support for the language must already be installed.  The easiest way to add support for different languages is at the time of installing your system.
@@ -24,6 +25,7 @@
   If all relevant language packs are installed on your system, you can change between different languages at login.  On the login screen, the bottom panel has a drop-down menu with the available language listed.  You can switch between languages by selecting a language from this menu before entering your login password.
   </p>
 
+<!-- Should also mention that the Languages capplet in the control centre can be used for this -->
 
   <comment>
    <cite date="2010-10-31" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list@gnome.org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>