[gnome-help] updated some info in 'mouse' pages

1 files changed, 29 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sound.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sound.page
index 9dbfbd2..52cca2b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-sound.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-sound.page
@@ -5,13 +5,15 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="mouse#style"/>
     
     <desc>
-    Play a sound when a button is clicked.
+    Play a sound when mouse is clicked.
     </desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-09-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-25" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
         <email>philbull@gmail.com</email>
+        <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+        <email>tiffany.antopolski@gmail.com</email>
     </credit>
     <copyright>
         <year>2009</year>
@@ -21,17 +23,32 @@
     <!-- <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/> -->
 </info>
 
-<title>Make a sound when the mouse is clicked</title>
+<title>Change Mouse Sound Setting</title>
 
 <steps>
+<item>
+  <p>
+  Click <guiseq><gui> Alt </gui><gui> F1 </gui></guiseq> or the Meta key, or touch the pointer to the top left corner (a.k.a. the "hot corner") to enter the <gui> Activities </gui> overview.
+  </p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>
+ Type 'sound'.
+ </p>
+ <p> 
+ Click on the <gui> Sound </gui> icon under <gui> Preferences </gui>.
+ </p>
+ </item>
+
  <item>
   <p>
-  Click <guiseq><gui>System</gui><gui>Preferences</gui><gui>Sound</gui></guiseq> 
-  and select the <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab.
+  Select the <gui> Sound Effects </gui> tab in the <gui> Sound Preferences </gui> window.
   </p>
  </item>
  <item>
+
   <p>
+You can change which sound is made by changing the <gui>Sound Theme</gui>.
   Choose a <gui>Sound Theme</gui> other than <gui>No sounds</gui>.
   </p>
  </item>
@@ -42,18 +59,14 @@
  </item>
  <item>
   <p>
-  Make sure that the <gui>Alert volume</gui> is turned up and that 
-  <gui>Mute</gui> is not checked.
+  Make sure that the <gui> Alert volume </gui> and <gui> Output volume </gui> are turned up and that 
+  <gui> Mute </gui> is not checked.
   </p>
  </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>
+ Click <gui> Close</gui>.
+ </p>
+ </item>
 </steps>
-
-<p>
-A short sound will be played whenever you click a button on the screen.
-</p>
-
-<p>
-You can change which sound is made by changing the <gui>Sound Theme</gui>.
-</p>
-
 </page>