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authorJim Campbell <jwcampbell@gmail.com>2011-03-19 19:20:03 -0500
committerJim Campbell <jwcampbell@gmail.com>2011-03-19 19:32:19 -0500
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completed audit review of user topic pages.
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page6
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page4
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page4
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-admin-privdescriptions.page8
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page4
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-admin-restrictothers.page4
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page4
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-delete.page13
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page70
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page13
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-modify.page4
-rw-r--r--gnome-help/C/user-privileges.page5
12 files changed, 64 insertions, 75 deletions
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
index b8fde2b..9e7a492 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="guide"
+ type="guide" style="task"
id="user-accounts">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="prefs#users" />
- <desc>Account preferences</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-24" status="candidate"/>
+ <desc>Set user account preferences.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
index 8a75b86..c295434 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="task"
id="user-admin-change">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="user-privileges"/>
<desc>XXX</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-10-31" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-10-31" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
index b780d8d..d0785cc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="tip"
id="user-admin-explain">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="user-privileges"/>
<desc>XXX</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-10-31" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-03-19" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-privdescriptions.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-privdescriptions.page
index b5f22a3..3ceb8ea 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-privdescriptions.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-privdescriptions.page
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="tip"
id="user-admin-privdescriptions">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="user-privileges"/>
- <desc>XXX</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-10-31" status="stub"/>
+ <desc>XXXXX</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-03-19" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
@@ -21,4 +21,4 @@
<p>Moderately advanced topic. Describe what each of the user privilege options in the users-admin tool does. Can be technical if you like (e.g. "takes write permission away from /dev/whatever when enabled". Mention relevant gconf keys - this will be useful to system admins.</p>
</comment>
-</page>
+</page
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
index 08d7181..fe04681 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="problem"
id="user-admin-problems">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="user-privileges"/>
<desc>XXX</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-10-31" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-restrictothers.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-restrictothers.page
index febd0f8..850005d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-restrictothers.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-restrictothers.page
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="task"
id="user-admin-restrictothers">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="user-privileges"/>
<desc>Lock down the computer by stopping others from accessing external disks, changing system settings, installing software, or connecting to other networks.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-10-31" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index a240e49..9f9fd64 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic" style="tsk"
+ type="topic" style="task"
id="user-changepassword">
<info>
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#passwords"/>
<desc>How to change your password.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-18" status="candidate"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list@gnome.org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
index 8e96e7f..a1e6523 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="task"
id="user-delete">
<info>
@@ -15,11 +15,10 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>Delete A User or Group</title>
+ <title>Delete a user or group</title>
-
- <section id = "delete-user">
- <title>Delete A User</title>
+ <section id="delete-user">
+ <title>Delete a user</title>
<p>To delete a user account from your computer:</p>
<steps>
@@ -59,8 +58,8 @@
</steps>
</section>
- <section id = "delete-group">
- <title>Delete A Group</title>
+ <section id="delete-group">
+ <title>Delete a group</title>
<p>To delete a group from your computer:</p>
<steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page
index 85b9cae..75869df 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="problem"
id="user-forgottenpassword">
<info>
@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>I Forgot My Password!</title>
+ <title>I forgot my password!</title>
<p>
It is important to not only choose <link xref="user-goodpassword">a good and secure password</link>, but one that you can also remember. In the event that you have forgotten the password to login to your computer account, you can follow the following steps to reset it.
</p>
- <note style = "important">
+ <note style="important">
<p>
If you have an encrypted home directory, you will not be able to reset a forgotten password.
</p>
@@ -27,15 +27,15 @@
<p>
If you simply want to change your password, see <link xref="user-changepassword"/>.
</p>
- <section><title>Reset Password on Grub2 Systems</title>
+ <section id="reset-password-grub2"><title>Reset password on Grub2 systems</title>
<steps>
<item>
<p>
- Restart your computer, and hold down the <key> Shift </key> during bootup to get into the grub menu.
+ Restart your computer, and hold down the <key>Shift</key> during bootup to get into the grub menu.
</p>
<note style="tip">
<p>
- If you have a dual-boot machine and you choose at boot time which operating system to boot into, the grub menu should appear without the need to hold down the <key> Shift </key> key.
+ If you have a dual-boot machine and you choose at boot time which operating system to boot into, the grub menu should appear without the need to hold down the <key>Shift</key> key.
</p>
</note>
<note>
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- Press <key> e </key> to edit the line that begins with the word 'linux'. This line may actually be wrapped onto a second line.
+ Press <key>e</key> to edit the line that begins with the word 'linux'. This line may actually be wrapped onto a second line.
</p>
</item>
<item>
@@ -55,12 +55,12 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- Press <keyseq><key> Ctrl </key><key> x </key></keyseq> to boot.
+ Press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key> x </key></keyseq> to boot.
</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>
- At the <cmd> # </cmd> symbol, type:
+ At the <cmd>#</cmd> symbol, type:
</p>
<p>
<cmd>mount -o remount, rw /</cmd>
@@ -68,14 +68,14 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- At the next <cmd> # </cmd> symbol type:
+ At the next <cmd>#</cmd> symbol type:
</p>
<p>
- <cmd> passwd username </cmd>, where username is the username of the password you are changing.
+ <cmd>passwd username</cmd>, where username is the username of the password you are changing.
</p>
<note>
<p>
- Debian systems do not have a <cmd> root </cmd> password. Therefore, on Debian systems you would always be changing the password of a particular username, never root.
+ Debian systems do not have a <cmd>root</cmd> password. Therefore, on Debian systems you would always be changing the password of a particular username, never root.
</p>
</note>
</item>
@@ -105,15 +105,15 @@
After you successfully login, you will not be able to access your keyring (since you don't remember the old password). This means that all your saved passwords for wireless networks, jabber accounts, etc. will no longer be accessible. You will need to <link xref="#delete-keyring">delete the old keyring</link> and start a new one.
</p>
</section>
- <section><title>Reset Password on Grub Systems</title>
+ <section id="reset-password-grub1"><title>Reset password on Grub systems</title>
<steps>
<item>
<p>
- Restart your computer, and press the <key> Esc </key> during bootup to get into the grub menu.
+ Restart your computer, and press the <key>Esc</key> during bootup to get into the grub menu.
</p>
<note style="tip">
<p>
- If you have a dual-boot machine and you choose at boot time which operating system to boot into, the grub menu should appear without the need to hold down the <key> Esc </key> key.
+ If you have a dual-boot machine and you choose at boot time which operating system to boot into, the grub menu should appear without the need to hold down the <key>Esc</key> key.
</p>
</note>
<note>
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- Press <key> e </key> to edit the line that begins with the word 'kernel'. This line may actually be wrapped onto a second line.
+ Press <key>e</key> to edit the line that begins with the word 'kernel'. This line may actually be wrapped onto a second line.
</p>
</item>
<item>
@@ -133,12 +133,12 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- Press <key> b </key> to boot.
+ Press <key>b</key> to boot.
</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>
- At the <cmd> # </cmd> symbol, type:
+ At the <cmd>#</cmd> symbol, type:
</p>
<p>
<cmd>mount -o remount, rw /</cmd>
@@ -146,14 +146,14 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- At the next <cmd> # </cmd> symbol type:
+ At the next <cmd>#</cmd> symbol type:
</p>
<p>
- <cmd> passwd username </cmd>, where username is the username of the password you are changing.
+ <cmd>passwd username</cmd>, where username is the username of the password you are changing.
</p>
<note>
<p>
- Debian systems do not have a <cmd> root </cmd> password. Therefore, on Debian systems you would always be changing the password of a particular username, never root.
+ Debian systems do not have a <cmd>root</cmd> password. Therefore, on Debian systems you would always be changing the password of a particular username, never root.
</p>
</note>
</item>
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
After you successfully login, you will not be able to access your keyring (since you don't remember the old password). This means that all your saved passwords for wireless networks, jabber accounts, etc. will no longer be accessible. You will need to <link xref="#delete-keyring">delete the old keyring</link> and start a new one.
</p>
</section>
- <section id="live-cd"><title>Reset Password Using a Live CD or USB</title>
+ <section id="reset-password-live-cd"><title>Reset password using a Live CD or USB</title>
<steps>
<item>
<p>
@@ -198,14 +198,14 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- Press <keyseq><key> Alt </key><key> F2 </key></keyseq> to get the <gui> Run Application </gui> dialog.
+ Press <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq> to get the <gui>Run Application</gui> dialog.
</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>
- Type <cmd> gksudo nautilus </cmd> to launch the file manager with system-wide privileges.
+ Type <cmd>gksudo nautilus</cmd> to launch the file manager with system-wide privileges.
</p>
- <note style = "tip">
+ <note style="tip">
<p>
Within the drive you just mounted, you can check that it is the right drive by clicking <gui> home </gui> and then your username.
</p>
@@ -213,27 +213,25 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- Go to the top-level directory of the mounted drive. Then go into the <gui> etc </gui> directory.
+ Go to the top-level directory of the mounted drive. Then go into the <gui>etc</gui> directory.
</p>
<p>
Locate the 'shadow' file and make a backup copy:
</p>
<steps>
<item><p>
- Make sure the <gui> Icon view </gui> is selected.
+ Make sure the <gui>Icon view</gui> is selected.
</p></item>
<item><p>
- Right-click on the shadow file and select <gui> copy </gui>.
+ Right-click on the shadow file and select <gui>copy</gui>.
</p></item>
<item><p>
- Then right-click in the empty space and select <gui> paste </gui>.
-
-
+ Then right-click in the empty space and select <gui>paste</gui>.
</p></item>
<item><p>
- <link xref = "files-renaming">Rename</link> the backup "shadow.bak".
+ <link xref="files-renaming">Rename</link> the backup "shadow.bak".
</p></item>
</steps>
</item>
@@ -266,12 +264,12 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- When you boot back into your installation, type 'about me' in the <gui> Activities </gui> overview. Open <gui> About Me </gui> and reset your password.
+ When you boot back into your installation, type 'about me' in the <gui>Activities</gui> overview. Open <gui>About Me</gui> and reset your password.
</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>
- For <gui> Current password </gui> do not enter anything, as your current password is blank. Just click <gui> Authenticate </gui> and enter a new password.
+ For <gui>Current password</gui> do not enter anything, as your current password is blank. Just click <gui>Authenticate</gui> and enter a new password.
</p>
</item>
@@ -282,7 +280,7 @@
</section>
- <section id = "delete-keyring">
+ <section id="delete-keyring">
<title>Get Rid of the Keyring Manager</title>
<steps>
@@ -290,7 +288,7 @@
Go to your Home folder by typing 'home' in the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.
</p></item>
<item><p>
- Press <keyseq><key> Ctrl </key><key> h </key></keyseq> (or click <guiseq><gui> View </gui><gui> Show Hidden Files </gui></guiseq>.)
+ Press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>h</key></keyseq> (or click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq>.)
</p></item>
<item><p>
Double click on the folder .gnome2
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
index 84fe493..1981695 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="tip"
id="user-goodpassword">
<info>
@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
-<title>Choosing A Secure Passphrase</title>
+<title>Choose a secure passphrase</title>
-<note style = "important">
+<note style="important">
<p>
Make your passphrases easy enough for you to remember, but very difficult for others (including computer programs) to guess.
</p>
@@ -65,8 +65,8 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>Use different passphrases for different things.</p>
-
</item>
+
<item>
<p>Use different passphrases for different accounts.</p>
<p>If you use the same passphrase for all of your accounts, anyone who guesses it will be able to access all of your accounts immediately.</p>
@@ -78,13 +78,8 @@
Change your passphrases regularly.
</p>
</item>
-
-
-
</list>
-
-
<comment>
<cite date="2010-10-31" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list@gnome.org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
<p>Tips on what makes a secure password.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-modify.page b/gnome-help/C/user-modify.page
index 10d7977..bde0046 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-modify.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-modify.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="topic"
+ type="topic" style="task"
id="user-modify">
<info>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
Next to the current username, click <gui>Change</gui>.
</p></item>
<item><p>
- You will be prompted for your password. Enter it and click <gui>Authenticate</gui>.
+ You will be prompted for your password. Enter it and click <gui>Authenticate</gui>.
</p></item>
<item><p>
Change the user's <gui>Full Name</gui> if applicable.
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-privileges.page b/gnome-help/C/user-privileges.page
index c53945f..de8a1ef 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-privileges.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-privileges.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
- type="guide"
+ type="guide" style="task"
id="user-privileges">
<info>
@@ -15,8 +15,5 @@
</info>
<title>Change user privileges</title>
-
-
-
</page>