2003-10-15 <patrick.costello@sun.com> Updated the GNOME 2.2 Accessibility Guide to suit the GNOME 2.4 Desktop. Minor changes only

:wq

7 files changed, 100 insertions, 94 deletions

diff --git a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/accessintro.xml b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/accessintro.xml
index 1741c38..c55bba5 100644
--- a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/accessintro.xml
+++ b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/accessintro.xml
@@ -1,21 +1,20 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
 <chapter id="accessintro-1">
   <title>Introduction to Accessibility</title>
-  <para>This chapter introduces you to accessibility in the GNOME desktop.</para>
+  <para>This chapter introduces you to accessibility in the GNOME Desktop.</para>
   <sect1 id="accessintro-2">
     <title>Overview of Accessibility</title>
     <para>All software products should incorporate accessibility features to enable
 people with disabilities to use the software easily and efficiently. Recent
 legislation such as Section 508 of the U.S. Rehabilitation Act heightens awareness
 of the need to provide accessible software. </para>
-    <para>The GNOME desktop is easy to use and incorporates many accessibility
-features. Every application and utility in the desktop is designed with accessibility
+    <para>The GNOME Desktop is easy to use and incorporates many accessibility
+features. Every application and utility in the Desktop is designed with accessibility
 and usability in mind. Users with physical disabilities such as low vision
-or impaired motor skills can use all of the functionality of the desktop thanks
+or impaired motor skills can use all of the functionality of the Desktop thanks
 to the customization tools that are available. The customization tools enable
-you to customize the appearance and behavior of the desktop.</para>
-    <para> The customizability of the desktop contributes greatly to the accessibility
-of the desktop. This manual describes the various customization options that
-you can use to tailor the desktop to suit your particular needs.</para>
+you to customize the appearance and behavior of the Desktop.</para>
+    <para> The customizability of the Desktop contributes greatly to the accessibility. This manual describes the various customization options that
+you can use to tailor the Desktop to suit your particular needs.</para>
   </sect1>
 </chapter>
diff --git a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/dtconfig.xml b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/dtconfig.xml
index 478f15d..267975b 100644
--- a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/dtconfig.xml
+++ b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/dtconfig.xml
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ setting takes effect.</para>
 of the pointer. </para>
       <sect3 id="dtconfig-8">
         <title>To Change the Pointer</title>
-        <para>To select the type of pointer that is displayed on the desktop, perform
+        <para>To select the type of pointer that is displayed on the Desktop, perform
 the following steps:</para>
         <orderedlist>
           <listitem>
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ repeat rate of a keypress. See <xref linkend="dtconfig-19"/>.</para>
     </itemizedlist>
     <sect2 id="dtconfig-12">
       <title>Before You Can Use AccessX in the Solaris&#8482; Operating Environment</title>
-      <para>If you are using the GNOME desktop for the Solaris&#8482; 8 operating
+      <para>If you are using the GNOME Desktop for the Solaris&#8482; 8 operating
 environment or the Solaris 9 operating environment, you must enable XKB on
 your system before you can use the <application>AccessX</application> preference
 tool. </para>
diff --git a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/gnome-access-guide-C.omf b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/gnome-access-guide-C.omf
index b70793b..c0c40c7 100755
--- a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/gnome-access-guide-C.omf
+++ b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/gnome-access-guide-C.omf
@@ -2,26 +2,26 @@
 <omf>

   <resource>

     <creator>

-      gdocteam@sun.com (Sun Microsystems)

+      docs@gnome.org Sun Microsystems

     </creator>

     <maintainer>

-      gdocteam@sun.com (Sun Microsystems)
+      docs@gnome.org Sun Microsystems
     </maintainer>

 <!--
     <title>

-      GNOME 2.2 Desktop Accessibility Guide V2.2.0
+      GNOME 2.4 Desktop Accessibility Guide V2.4.0
     </title>
 -->
     <title>

       Accessibility Guide
     </title>

     <date>

-      2003-02-14
+      2003-10-15
     </date>

-    <version identifier="2.2.0" date="2003-02-14" description="Multiplatform accessibility guide"/>

+    <version identifier="2.4.0" date="2003-10-15" description="Multiplatform accessibility guide"/>

     <subject category="GNOME|Desktop"/>

     <description>

-      Accessibility Guide for the GNOME 2.2 Desktop
+      Accessibility Guide for the GNOME 2.4 Desktop
     </description>

     <type>

       accessibility guide

diff --git a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/gnome-access-guide.xml b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/gnome-access-guide.xml
index 08595aa..a78bb9f 100644
--- a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/gnome-access-guide.xml
+++ b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/gnome-access-guide.xml
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>

 <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.1.2//EN" 
 "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.1.2/docbookx.dtd" [
-  <!ENTITY gnomeversion "2.2">

-  <!ENTITY manrevision "2.2.0">

-  <!ENTITY date "February 2003">

+  <!ENTITY gnomeversion "2.4">

+  <!ENTITY manrevision "2.4.0">

+  <!ENTITY date "October 2003">

   <!ENTITY LEGAL SYSTEM "legal.xml">

   <!ENTITY dtconfig SYSTEM "dtconfig.xml">

   <!ENTITY keynav SYSTEM "keynav.xml">  

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 		<holder>Sun Microsystems</holder> 

 	 </copyright>

 

-<!--   translators: uncomment this:

+<!--  translators: uncomment this:

   <copyright>

    <year>2002</year>

    <holder>ME-THE-TRANSLATOR (Latin translation)</holder>

@@ -47,6 +47,14 @@
 			 <para role="author">Sun Microsystems</para> 
 			 <para role="publisher">GNOME Documentation Project</para> 
 		  </revdescription> 
+		</revision>
+	   <revision> 

+		  <revnumber>GNOME 2.2 Desktop Accessibility Guide V2.2.0</revnumber> 

+		  <date>February 2003</date> 

+		  <revdescription> 

+			 <para role="author">Sun Microsystems</para> 
+			 <para role="publisher">GNOME Documentation Project</para> 
+		  </revdescription> 
 		</revision>

 		<revision> 

 		  <revnumber>GNOME 2.0 Desktop for the Solaris Operating Environment Accessibility Guide V2.1</revnumber> 

@@ -65,11 +73,11 @@
 		  </revdescription> 
 		</revision>  

 	 </revhistory> 

-	 <releaseinfo> This manual describes version &gnomeversion; of the GNOME desktop.

+	 <releaseinfo> This manual describes version &gnomeversion; of the GNOME Desktop.

 		</releaseinfo> 

 	 <legalnotice> 

 		<title>Feedback</title> 

-		<para> To report a bug or make a suggestion regarding the GNOME desktop or this

+		<para> To report a bug or make a suggestion regarding the GNOME Desktop or this

 		  manual, follow the directions in the <ulink url="ghelp:gnome-feedback"
 	  type="help">GNOME Feedback Page</ulink>. </para>

 	 </legalnotice> 

diff --git a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/keynav.xml b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/keynav.xml
index e8c3e40..859fd49 100644
--- a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/keynav.xml
+++ b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/keynav.xml
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
 <chapter id="keynav-0">
   <title>Using the Keyboard to Navigate the Desktop</title>
-  <para>This chapter describes how to navigate the desktop from the keyboard
+  <para>This chapter describes how to navigate the Desktop from the keyboard
 only. Users who have difficulty using a mouse or other pointing device can
-navigate and use the desktop from the keyboard.</para>
+navigate and use the Desktop from the keyboard.</para>
   <sect1 id="keynav-1">
     <title>Introduction to Keyboard Navigation</title>
     <para>This section describes the essential keyboard shortcuts to enable you
-to navigate the desktop from the keyboard. </para>
+to navigate the Desktop from the keyboard. </para>
     <para>You can customize some of the keyboard shortcuts that are described
 in this chapter. The text indicates the shortcuts that you can customize.
 See <xref linkend="keynav-36"/> for information about how to customize keyboard
@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ shortcuts. </para>
     <sect2 id="keynav-2">
       <title>Essential Keyboard Shortcuts</title>
       <para>The following table lists the essential keyboard shortcuts that you
-can use to navigate the desktop. The keyboard shortcuts that you use to navigate
-specific desktop elements and controls are described in the appropriate sections
+can use to navigate the Desktop. The keyboard shortcuts that you use to navigate
+specific Desktop elements and controls are described in the appropriate sections
 of this chapter.</para>
       <informaltable frame="topbot">
         <tgroup cols="2" colsep="0" rowsep="0">
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ of this chapter.</para>
                 </para>
               </entry>
               <entry valign="top">
-                <para>Give focus to the next desktop element or control.</para>
+                <para>Give focus to the next Desktop element or control.</para>
               </entry>
             </row>
             <row>
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ of this chapter.</para>
               </entry>
               <entry colname="colspec1" valign="top">
                 <para>Reverse
-the navigation direction and give focus to the previous desktop element or
+the navigation direction and give focus to the previous Desktop element or
 control. In general, the <keycap>Shift</keycap> key reverses the navigation
 direction.</para>
               </entry>
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ press <keycombo><keycap>Shift</keycap><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>Tab</keycap><
                 <para>arrow keys</para>
               </entry>
               <entry colname="colspec1" valign="top">
-                <para>Navigate within a desktop element
+                <para>Navigate within a Desktop element
 or control.</para>
               </entry>
             </row>
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ is the equivalent of clicking on the button with a mouse.</para>
     <sect2 id="keynav-3">
       <title>Global Keyboard Shortcuts</title>
       <para>The following table lists the keyboard shortcuts that you can use from
-any part of the desktop. </para>
+any part of the Desktop. </para>
       <informaltable frame="topbot">
         <tgroup cols="2" colsep="0" rowsep="0">
           <colspec colname="colspec0" colwidth="43.94*"/>
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ currently has focus.</para>
                 </para>
               </entry>
               <entry colname="colspec1" valign="top">
-                <para>If the focused desktop element
+                <para>If the focused Desktop element
 is an application window or dialog, this keyboard shortcut opens the online
 help for the application.</para>
               </entry>
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ help for the application.</para>
               </entry>
               <entry colname="colspec1" valign="top">
                 <para>If
-the focused desktop element is a panel or application window, this keyboard
+the focused Desktop element is a panel or application window, this keyboard
 shortcut switches the display of tooltips for the window or panel objects
 on and off.</para>
               </entry>
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ on and off.</para>
               </entry>
               <entry colname="colspec1" valign="top">
                 <para>Open
-a popup menu for the desktop element that has focus, if a popup menu exists.</para>
+a popup menu for the Desktop element that has focus, if a popup menu exists.</para>
               </entry>
             </row>
           </tbody>
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ a popup menu for the desktop element that has focus, if a popup menu exists.</pa
   </sect1>
   <sect1 id="keynav-4">
     <title>Navigating the Desktop Background</title>
-    <para>The desktop background is the part of the desktop where there are no
+    <para>The desktop background is the part of the Desktop where there are no
 interface items or applications, such as panels and windows. The following
 table lists the keyboard shortcuts that you can use to navigate the desktop
 background and the desktop background objects. A desktop background object
@@ -318,9 +318,9 @@ the <guimenu>Desktop Background</guimenu> menu.</para>
   </sect1>
   <sect1 id="keynav-5">
     <title>Navigating Panels</title>
-    <para>A panel is an area on the desktop from which you can run special programs,
+    <para>A panel is an area on the Desktop from which you can run special programs,
 applications, and applets. The most common panel is the Menu Panel, which
-stretches the full width of the top edge of the desktop. The following table
+stretches the full width of the top edge of the Desktop. The following table
 lists the keyboard shortcuts that you can use to navigate panels and panel
 objects.</para>
     <informaltable frame="topbot">
@@ -751,7 +751,7 @@ how to navigate menus.</para>
   <sect1 id="keynav-10">
     <title>Navigating Your Workspaces</title>
     <para>A workspace is a discrete area in which you can work. You can have many
-workspaces on your desktop and you can switch from one workspace to another.
+workspaces on your Desktop and you can switch from one workspace to another.
 Each workspace can contain different windows and processes. The following
 table lists the keyboard shortcuts that you can use to navigate workspaces.</para>
     <informaltable frame="topbot">
@@ -1219,7 +1219,7 @@ had focus.</para>
   <sect1 id="keynav-17">
     <title>Navigating Applications</title>
     <para>An application is any program, utility, or other software package that
-you run on your desktop. Applications comprise the following standard user
+you run on your Desktop. Applications comprise the following standard user
 interface components: </para>
     <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
@@ -1253,7 +1253,7 @@ that are available.</para>
 shortcuts that you can use to start using applications and dialogs. </para>
     <sect2 id="keynav-18">
       <title>Essential Keyboard Shortcuts for Navigating Applications</title>
-      <para>Since there are many applications that you can use in the desktop, this
+      <para>Since there are many applications that you can use in the Desktop, this
 manual does not describe the keyboard shortcuts that you can use to navigate
 all of the different applications. However, the basic keyboard shortcuts are
 common to all applications. Access keys also provide an efficient way to navigate
@@ -3065,7 +3065,7 @@ item.</para>
   <sect1 id="keynav-36">
     <title>Customizing Your Keyboard Shortcuts</title>
     <para>Use the <application>Keyboard Shortcuts</application> preference tool
-to display the default keyboard shortcuts that you use to navigate the desktop.
+to display the default keyboard shortcuts that you use to navigate the Desktop.
 You can customize the default keyboard shortcuts to meet your requirements.
 You can also create hot keys. Hot keys are keyboard shortcuts that start applications. </para>
     <para>To start the <application>Keyboard Shortcuts</application> preference
diff --git a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/preface.xml b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/preface.xml
index 9d804d6..1dd6b64 100644
--- a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/preface.xml
+++ b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/preface.xml
@@ -2,13 +2,13 @@
   
   <preface id="preface-1">
     <title>Preface</title>
-    <para>The <citetitle>GNOME 2.2 Desktop Accessibility Guide</citetitle> describes
+    <para>The <citetitle>GNOME 2.4 Desktop Accessibility Guide</citetitle> describes
 how to configure, customize, and use the accessibility features of the GNOME
-2.2 desktop.</para>
+2.4 Desktop.</para>
     <sect1 id="preface-9">
       <title id="preface-2">Who Should Use This Book</title>
       <para>This manual is for users, system administrators, and anyone who is interested
-in how the GNOME 2.0 desktop satisfies Section 508 of the U.S. Rehabilitation
+in how the GNOME 2.4 Desktop satisfies Section 508 of the U.S. Rehabilitation
 Act.</para>
     </sect1>
     <sect1 id="preface-4">
@@ -17,20 +17,19 @@ Act.</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para><xref linkend="accessintro-1"/> introduces you to accessibility
-in the GNOME desktop.</para>
+in the GNOME Desktop.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para><xref linkend="dtconfig-0"/> describes how to configure the
 mouse and keyboard to make these devices accessible to more users.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para><xref linkend="keynav-0"/> describes how to navigate the desktop
+          <para><xref linkend="keynav-0"/> describes how to navigate the Desktop
 from the keyboard only.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para><xref linkend="themes-0"/> describes the methods you can use
-to change the appearance of the desktop to enhance the accessibility of the
-desktop for users with visual impairments.</para>
+to change the appearance of the Desktop to enhance the accessibility for users with visual impairments.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </sect1>
@@ -40,12 +39,12 @@ desktop for users with visual impairments.</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <citetitle>GNOME 2.2 Desktop System Administration Guide</citetitle>
+            <citetitle>GNOME 2.4 Desktop System Administration Guide</citetitle>
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <citetitle>GNOME 2.2 Desktop User Guide</citetitle>
+            <citetitle>GNOME 2.4 Desktop User Guide</citetitle>
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
diff --git a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/themes.xml b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/themes.xml
index ebd4125..b8cdbf8 100644
--- a/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/themes.xml
+++ b/gnome2-accessibility-guide/C/themes.xml
@@ -2,36 +2,36 @@
 <chapter id="themes-0">
   <title>Customizing the Appearance of the Desktop</title>
   <para>This chapter describes the methods you can use to change the appearance
-of the desktop to enhance the accessibility of the desktop for users with
+of the Desktop to enhance accessibility for users with
 visual impairments.</para>
   <sect1 id="themes-1">
     <title>Customization Options</title>
     <para>There are a number of methods to enable you to customize the appearance
-of the desktop to suit your specific needs, as follows:</para>
+of the Desktop to suit your specific needs, as follows:</para>
     <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
         <term>Themes</term>
         <listitem>
           <para>Themes are the most effective
-way to change the appearance of the desktop in a consistent manner. See <xref linkend="themes-2"/> for more information about themes and how to use themes
-to achieve the type of desktop that you require.</para>
+way to change the appearance of the Desktop in a consistent manner. See <xref linkend="themes-2"/> for more information about themes and how to use themes
+to achieve the type of Desktop that you require.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
       <varlistentry>
         <term>Desktop and application-specific configuration settings</term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>You can customize different components of the desktop
+          <para>You can customize different components of the Desktop
 individually to achieve the display settings that you require. You can configure
-the desktop and applications in addition to using themes or as an alternative
+the Desktop and applications in addition to using themes or as an alternative
 to using themes. See <xref linkend="themes-7"/> for more information.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>
     <para>The following table summarizes the changes that you can
-make to the desktop and where you can make the changes. This manual does not
-provide detailed instructions about how to customize the desktop. For detailed
-instructions about how to use the customization tools that the desktop provides,
-refer to the online help for each tool or to the <citetitle>GNOME 2.0 Desktop User Guide</citetitle>.</para>
+make to the Desktop and where you can make the changes. This manual does not
+provide detailed instructions about how to customize the Desktop. For detailed
+instructions about how to use the customization tools that the Desktop provides,
+refer to the online help for each tool or to the <citetitle>GNOME 2.4 Desktop User Guide</citetitle>.</para>
     <table frame="topbot" id="themes-TBL-1">
       <title>Quick Reference to Customizing the Appearance of the Desktop</title>
       <tgroup cols="2" colsep="0" rowsep="0">
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ refer to the online help for each tool or to the <citetitle>GNOME 2.0 Desktop Us
         <tbody>
           <row>
             <entry valign="top">
-              <para>Overall appearance of the desktop to use high
+              <para>Overall appearance of the Desktop to use high
 contrast colors, low contrast colors, or large print.</para>
             </entry>
             <entry valign="top">
@@ -68,8 +68,8 @@ preference tool and the <application>Nautilus</application> file manager <guilab
           </row>
           <row>
             <entry valign="top">
-              <para>Font displayed on the desktop background and
-in all desktop applications.</para>
+              <para>Font displayed on the Desktop and
+in all Desktop applications.</para>
             </entry>
             <entry valign="top">
               <para>The <application>Font</application> preference tool.</para>
@@ -101,17 +101,17 @@ tabs in the <application>Nautilus</application> file manager application.</para>
   <sect1 id="themes-2">
     <title>Using Themes to Customize the Desktop</title>
     <para>This section describes how to use themes to customize the appearance
-of the desktop.</para>
+of the Desktop.</para>
     <sect2 id="themes-3">
       <title>Introduction to Themes</title>
-      <para>You can use themes to modify and control the appearance of the desktop
+      <para>You can use themes to modify and control the appearance of the Desktop
 in a consistent manner. A theme is a group of coordinated settings that specifies
-how a desktop component or a group of desktop components appears. When you
-apply a theme, the system modifies many desktop components simultaneously
+how a Desktop component or a group of Desktop components appears. When you
+apply a theme, the system modifies many Desktop components simultaneously
 to achieve the desired effect. For example, if you apply a theme that increases
-the font size across the desktop, the theme also modifies the size of panels
-and icons on the desktop for optimum compatibility with the font size. </para>
-      <para>The following types of themes affect different parts of the desktop: </para>
+the font size across the Desktop, the theme also modifies the size of panels
+and icons on the Desktop for optimum compatibility with the font size. </para>
+      <para>The following types of themes affect different parts of the Desktop: </para>
       <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
           <term>Desktop themes</term>
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ and icons on the desktop for optimum compatibility with the font size. </para>
 the visual appearance of all windows, applications, dialogs, panels, and applets.
 Desktop themes also determine the visual appearance of the GNOME-compliant
 interface items that appear on windows, panels, and applets, such as menus,
-icons, and buttons. Some of the desktop themes that are available in the desktop
+icons, and buttons. Some of the Desktop themes that are available in the Desktop
 are designed for special accessibility needs.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -136,12 +136,12 @@ themes determine the appearance of the frames around windows only.</para>
     <sect2 id="themes-4">
       <title>To Choose a Desktop Theme</title>
       <para>To open the <application>Theme</application> preference tool and view
-the desktop themes that are available, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guisubmenu>Desktop Preferences</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Theme</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. The <guilabel>Theme Preferences</guilabel>
+the Desktop themes that are available, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guisubmenu>Desktop Preferences</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Theme</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. The <guilabel>Theme Preferences</guilabel>
 dialog is displayed. Click on the <guilabel>Widget Theme</guilabel> tab to
-display the desktop themes that are available. To choose a new theme for the
-desktop, click on a theme in the <guilabel>Widget Theme</guilabel> list box.
-The system automatically applies the theme to the desktop. </para>
-      <para>There are several desktop themes available that suit different accessibility
+display the Desktop themes that are available. To choose a new theme for the
+Desktop, click on a theme in the <guilabel>Widget Theme</guilabel> list box.
+The system automatically applies the theme to the Desktop. </para>
+      <para>There are several Desktop themes available that suit different accessibility
 needs. These themes are described in the following table:</para>
       <table frame="topbot" id="themes-TBL-2">
         <title>Desktop Themes Designed for Accessibility Requirements</title>
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ the background and foreground text. </para>
               </entry>
               <entry colname="colspec1" valign="top">
                 <para>Increases the font size to 18pt.
-The background and foreground colors are the same as those specified by the <guilabel>Default</guilabel> desktop theme.</para>
+The background and foreground colors are the same as those specified by the <guilabel>Default</guilabel> Desktop theme.</para>
               </entry>
             </row>
             <row>
@@ -250,18 +250,18 @@ display the window frame themes that are available. The <guilabel>Atlanta</guila
     </sect2>
     <sect2 id="themes-6">
       <title>To Create Your Own Themes</title>
-      <para>For information about how to create your own desktop themes and window
-frame themes, see the <citetitle>GNOME 2.0 Desktop System Administration Guide</citetitle>. </para>
+      <para>For information about how to create your own Desktop themes and window
+frame themes, see the <citetitle>GNOME 2.4 Desktop System Administration Guide</citetitle>. </para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
   <sect1 id="themes-7">
     <title>Customizing Specific Components of the Desktop</title>
-    <para>This section describes how to customize specific components of the desktop
+    <para>This section describes how to customize specific components of the Desktop
 individually.</para>
     <sect2 id="themes-8">
       <title>To Customize the Desktop Background</title>
-      <para>The desktop themes do not affect the desktop background. Therefore to
-modify the desktop background to complement your desktop, you must customize
+      <para>The Desktop themes do not affect the desktop background. Therefore to
+modify the desktop background to complement your Desktop, you must customize
 the desktop background separately using the <application>Background</application>
 preference tool. To start the <application>Background</application> preference
 tool, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guisubmenu>Desktop Preferences</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Background</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.</para>
@@ -290,16 +290,16 @@ drop-down list.</para>
     </sect2>
     <sect2 id="themes-10">
       <title>To Customize Fonts</title>
-      <para>This section describes how to customize the font settings for the desktop
+      <para>This section describes how to customize the font settings for the Desktop
 and frequently-used applications.</para>
       <para>If you have difficulty with the default font type and font size that
-is used on the desktop and desktop background, you can customize the font
+is used on the Desktop and desktop background, you can customize the font
 settings to suit your needs. </para>
-      <para>You can specify individual font settings for the following desktop components
+      <para>You can specify individual font settings for the following Desktop components
 and applications: </para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Entire desktop excluding the desktop background</para>
+          <para>Entire Desktop excluding the desktop background</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>Desktop background only</para>
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ and applications: </para>
       <sect3 id="themes-11">
         <title>To Customize the Desktop Fonts</title>
         <para>The <application>Font</application> preference tool allows you to specify
-the default fonts for the desktop. </para>
+the default fonts for the Desktop. </para>
         <para>To start the <application>Font</application> preference tool, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guisubmenu>Desktop Preferences</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Font</guimenuitem></menuchoice>. The <guilabel>Font Preferences</guilabel> dialog contains the following options: </para>
         <variablelist>
           <varlistentry>
@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ the default fonts for the desktop. </para>
             </term>
             <listitem>
               <para>Click on this button to select a default font to use for the text that
-is displayed on the desktop, including the text displayed on the windows and
+is displayed on the Desktop, including the text displayed on the windows and
 dialogs associated with GNOME-compliant applications and applets.</para>
               <note>
                 <para>If you use the <application>Theme</application> preference tool
@@ -433,19 +433,19 @@ menu items:</para>
   <sect1 id="themes-15">
     <title>Meeting Specific Accessibility Needs</title>
     <para>The following sections summarize the steps you need to take to improve
-the accessibility of the desktop in a particular area. </para>
+the accessibility of the Desktop in a particular area. </para>
     <sect2 id="themes-16">
       <title>To Achieve a High or Low Contrast Desktop</title>
-      <para>To achieve a high or low contrast desktop, perform the following steps:</para>
+      <para>To achieve a high or low contrast Desktop, perform the following steps:</para>
       <orderedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>Use the <application>Theme</application> preference tool to
-select the high contrast or low contrast desktop theme that you require.</para>
+select the high contrast or low contrast Desktop theme that you require.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>Use the <application>Theme</application> preference tool to
 select a window frame theme. You should select the <guilabel>Atlanta</guilabel>
-window frame theme for use with high contrast desktop themes. The <guilabel>Atlanta</guilabel> window frame theme may also improve readability for some
+window frame theme for use with high contrast Desktop themes. The <guilabel>Atlanta</guilabel> window frame theme may also improve readability for some
 users. However, you can choose the window frame theme that best suits your
 needs. </para>
         </listitem>
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ in the <guilabel>Preferences</guilabel> dialog.</para>
     </sect2>
     <sect2 id="themes-17">
       <title>To Achieve a Large Print Desktop</title>
-      <para>To achieve a large print desktop, perform the following steps:</para>
+      <para>To achieve a large print Desktop, perform the following steps:</para>
       <orderedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>Use the <application>Theme</application> preference tool to
@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@ select the large print theme that you require.</para>
         <listitem>
           <para>Use the <application>Theme</application> preference tool to
 select a window frame theme. You can use the <guilabel>Crux</guilabel>, <guilabel>Atlanta</guilabel>, or <guilabel>Bright</guilabel> window frame themes with
-large print desktop themes, depending on the contrast level that you prefer.</para>
+large print Desktop themes, depending on the contrast level that you prefer.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>Use the <application>Font</application> preference tool to