update labels for screensaver preferences. Patch from Milo Casagrande,

  * goscustdesk.xml: update labels for screensaver preferences. Patch from Milo Casagrande, fixes #380083

2 files changed, 10 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/gnome2-user-guide/C/ChangeLog b/gnome2-user-guide/C/ChangeLog
index 58874a0..039fcec 100644
--- a/gnome2-user-guide/C/ChangeLog
+++ b/gnome2-user-guide/C/ChangeLog
@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
 2006-12-23  Joachim Noreiko  <jnoreiko@yahoo.com>
 
   * gosnautilus.xml: Shift+Del shortcut. Patch from Milo Casagrande, fixes #362646
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+  * goscustdesk.xml: update labels for screensaver preferences. Patch from Milo Casagrande, fixes #380083
+  
 2006-12-20  Joachim Noreiko  <jnoreiko@yahoo.com>
 
   * goscustdesk.xml: warn of bugs in adding fonts: 
diff --git a/gnome2-user-guide/C/goscustdesk.xml b/gnome2-user-guide/C/goscustdesk.xml
index 2e84a6c..98d9791 100644
--- a/gnome2-user-guide/C/goscustdesk.xml
+++ b/gnome2-user-guide/C/goscustdesk.xml
@@ -2311,26 +2311,26 @@ this computer only</guilabel>
       <primary>preference tools</primary>
       <secondary>screensaver</secondary>
     </indexterm>
-    <para>A <firstterm>screensaver</firstterm> displays moving images on your screen when your computer is not being used. Screensavers also help prevent older monitors being damaged by the same image being displayed for long periods of time.</para>
+    <para>A <firstterm>screensaver</firstterm> displays moving images on your screen when your computer is not being used. Screensavers also help prevent older monitors being damaged by the same image being displayed for long periods of time. To stop the screensaver and return to the desktop, move the mouse or press a key on the keyboard.</para>
     <para>Use the <application>Screensaver</application> preference tool to set the type of screensaver, the time before the screensaver starts, and whether to require a password to return to the desktop.</para>
     <para>You can modify the following settings:</para>
     <variablelist>
     	<varlistentry>
     	  <term>Screensaver</term>
-    	  <listitem><para>Select the type of screensaver to display. The preview area to the right of the list shows the how the selected screensaver will look on your screen.</para>
+    	  <listitem><para>Select the <guilabel>Screensaver theme</guilabel> from the list. A reduced version of the selected screensaver theme is shown. Press <guibutton>Preview</guibutton> to show the selected theme on the whole screen. During preview, use the arrow buttons at the top of the screen to go through the list of screensaver themes.</para>
     	  <itemizedlist>
-	        <listitem><para>The <guilabel>Blank screen</guilabel> screensaver displays no image and only shows a black screen.</para></listitem>
-	        <listitem><para>The <guilabel>Random</guilabel> screensaver selects a screensaver to display from the list at random.</para></listitem>
+	        <listitem><para>The <guilabel>Blank screen</guilabel> theme displays no image and only shows a black screen.</para></listitem>
+	        <listitem><para>The <guilabel>Random</guilabel> theme selects a screensaver to display from the list at random.</para></listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
     	  <para>Which screensavers are shown in the remainder of the list depends on your distributor or vendor.</para></listitem>
     	</varlistentry>
     	<varlistentry>
-    	  <term>Set session as idle after ... minutes</term>
-    	  <listitem><para>If GNOME receives no input from you for this length of time (such as moving the mouse or typing), the computer is set as idle. This may affect power management (the monitor may power down for example) or instant messaging (chat applications may set your status as "away"). Use the slider to set the length of time in minutes.</para></listitem>
+    	  <term>Regard the computer as idle after...</term>
+    	  <listitem><para>Your computer becomes idle after this amount of time has passed with no input from you, such as moving the mouse or typing. This may affect power management (the monitor may power down for example) or instant messaging (chat applications may set your status as "away"). Use the slider to set the length of time in minutes or hours.</para></listitem>
     	</varlistentry>
     	<varlistentry>
-    	  <term>Activate the screensaver when session is idle</term>
-    	  <listitem><para>Select this option to have the screensaver start after the set length of time. To stop the screensaver and return to the desktop, move the mouse or press a key on the keyboard.</para></listitem>
+    	  <term>Activate screensaver when computer is idle</term>
+    	  <listitem><para>Select this option to have the screensaver start after the set length of time. </para></listitem>
     	</varlistentry>
     	<varlistentry>
     	  <term>Lock screen when screensaver is active</term>