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authorJoachim Noreiko <joachimn@src.gnome.org>2006-09-06 19:05:57 +0000
committerJoachim Noreiko <joachimn@src.gnome.org>2006-09-06 19:05:57 +0000
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better wording for writing CDs: patch from Chris Wagner for #354625
* gosnautilus.xml: better wording for writing CDs: patch from Chris Wagner for #354625
-rw-r--r--gnome2-user-guide/C/ChangeLog5
-rw-r--r--gnome2-user-guide/C/gosnautilus.xml4
2 files changed, 7 insertions, 2 deletions
diff --git a/gnome2-user-guide/C/ChangeLog b/gnome2-user-guide/C/ChangeLog
index 43699f1..70ae38e 100644
--- a/gnome2-user-guide/C/ChangeLog
+++ b/gnome2-user-guide/C/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,8 @@
+2006-09-06 Joachim Noreiko <jnoreiko@yahoo.com>
+
+ * gosnautilus.xml: better wording for writing CDs:
+ patch from Chris Wagner for #354625
+
2006-09-04 Joachim Noreiko <jnoreiko@yahoo.com>
* goseditmainmenu.xml: change window title for alacarte menu editor
diff --git a/gnome2-user-guide/C/gosnautilus.xml b/gnome2-user-guide/C/gosnautilus.xml
index c10c096..afed5a5 100644
--- a/gnome2-user-guide/C/gosnautilus.xml
+++ b/gnome2-user-guide/C/gosnautilus.xml
@@ -2936,12 +2936,12 @@ the diskette. Do not remove a USB flash drive before you unmount the flash drive
<primary>burning CDs</primary>
<see>writing CDs</see>
</indexterm>
- <para>Writing a CD or DVD is a good method of backup up your important documents. To do this, your computer must have a CD or DVD writer.
+ <para>Writing to a CD or DVD may be useful for backing up your important documents. To do this, your computer must have a CD or DVD writer.
</para>
<tip><para>A simple way to check what sort of CD or DVD drive your computer has is to choose <menuchoice><guimenu>Places</guimenu><guimenuitem>Computer</guimenuitem></menuchoice> from the top panel menubar. If the icon for your CD drive has terms like "CD-RW" or "DVD(+-)R" in its label, then your computer is able to write discs.</para></tip>
<para>You can start choosing files to burn to a disc at any time. The file manager provides
-a special folder for files and folders that you want to write to a CD or DVD. From here you can write the contents of the location to a CD or DVD easily.</para>
+a special folder for files and folders that you wish to write to a CD or DVD. From there you can easily write all of the content (which you place in this special folder) to a CD or DVD.</para>
<sect2 id="nautilus-cdwriter-data">
<title>Creating Data Discs</title>