updated section on detachable toolbars

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/gnome2-user-guide/C/gosoverview.xml b/gnome2-user-guide/C/gosoverview.xml
index a4d4eeb..2452b6f 100644
--- a/gnome2-user-guide/C/gosoverview.xml
+++ b/gnome2-user-guide/C/gosoverview.xml
@@ -465,11 +465,8 @@ specify the number of workspaces that you require.</para>
   A toolbar contains buttons for the most commonly-used commands. A <firstterm>statusbar</firstterm> is a bar at the bottom of a window that provides information
   about the current state of what you are viewing in the window. GNOME-compliant
   applications might also contains other bars. For example, <application>Nautilus</application> contains a location bar.</para>
-          <para>Some of the bars in GNOME-compliant applications are detachable. That
-  is, the bar has a handle that you can grab then drag the bar to another location.
-  You can drag the bar to snap to another side of the window, or to another
-  part of the screen. For example, you can detach the menubar, toolbar, and
-  location bar in the file manager. </para>
+          <para>You can choose to make the toolbars in GNOME-compliant applications <firstterm>detachable</firstterm>. That
+  is, the toolbar can be removed from within the window and placed anywhere on the screen. When this option is enabled, each toolbar has a handle that you can grab then drag the bar to another location.  You can drag the bar to snap to another side of the window, or to another part of the screen.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>Default shortcut keys</para>
@@ -479,11 +476,9 @@ specify the number of workspaces that you require.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>Drag-and-drop</para>
-          <para>GNOME-compliant applications use the same protocol to implement drag-and-drop
-  operations. Therefore, GNOME-compliant applications provide consistent feedback
-  when you drag-and-drop items.</para>
-          <para>The use of the same protocol also enables GNOME-compliant applications
-  to interoperate in a sophisticated manner. For example, GNOME-compliant applications
+          <para>GNOME-compliant applications provide consistent feedback
+  when you drag-and-drop items, and interoperate in a sophisticated manner.</para>
+          <para>For example, GNOME-compliant applications
   recognize the format of the items that you drag. When you drag a HTML file
   from a <application>Nautilus</application> window to a web browser, the file
   is displayed in HTML format in the browser. However, when you drag the HTML