From ee20ed8cbd098f2453fcda517a786d314823a8dc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 24 Aug 2005 12:30:26 +0000
Subject: Clean up CVS instructions a bit, removing excess tagging in screens,
 some style changes

---
 docs-getting-files-en.xml | 39 ++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs-getting-files-en.xml b/docs-getting-files-en.xml
index dd6c773..e289d05 100644
--- a/docs-getting-files-en.xml
+++ b/docs-getting-files-en.xml
@@ -32,34 +32,31 @@
     <para>
       The custom scripts and stylesheets used are all stored in CVS on the
       <computeroutput>cvs.fedora.redhat.com</computeroutput> CVS server.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
       You need to check them out along with the DocBook XML files for the
       existing docs.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      Get started by following these once-only steps.
-      When asked for a <abbrev>CVS</abbrev> password, just press the <guibutton>ENTER</guibutton> key.
+      You should perform these steps only once, when you first make a checkout
+      from docs CVS.  When you see the password prompt, just press the
+      <keycap>Enter</keycap> key.
     </para>
 
 <screen>
-<prompt>$ </prompt><command>mkdir my-fedora-docs</command>
-<prompt>$ </prompt><command>cd my-fedora-docs</command>
-<prompt>$ </prompt><command>export CVSROOT=:pserver:anonymous@cvs.fedora.redhat.com:/cvs/docs</command>
-<prompt>$ </prompt><command>cvs login</command>
-&lt;enter&gt;
-<prompt>$ </prompt><command>cvs co docs-setup</command>
+<userinput>mkdir my-fedora-docs
+cd my-fedora-docs
+export CVSROOT=:pserver:anonymous@cvs.fedora.redhat.com:/cvs/docs
+cvs login
+cvs co docs-setup</userinput>
 </screen>
 
     <para>
-      Checking the files out anonymously means that you can view them and
-      retreive the latest versions, but you can not add (commit) any updates or
-      new files back to the repository.
-      You need <abbrev>CVS</abbrev> write access for that; check with the
-      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/NewWriters"><filename>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/NewWriters</filename></ulink>
-      site to learn about getting write access to <abbrev>CVS</abbrev>.
+      When you perform an anonymous CVS checkout, you can view the files and
+      retreive the latest versions.  You can not add (commit) any updates or new
+      files back to the repository.  To commit changes to CVS, you must have
+      <abbrev>CVS</abbrev> write access.  Refer to <ulink
+      url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/NewWriters"/> to learn
+    about getting write access to <abbrev>CVS</abbrev>.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -72,12 +69,12 @@
       Pick your document of interest and then download it to your working directory:
     </para>
 
-<screen><prompt>$ </prompt><command>cvs co example-tutorial</command></screen>
+<screen><userinput>cvs co example-tutorial</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>
-      Except for the <citetitle>&IG;</citetitle>, all docs must be tutorials
-      written in DocBook XML article format using the template in the
-      <filename>example-tutorial</filename> directory. Each tutorial
+      Except for the <citetitle>&IG;</citetitle>, all documentation in CVS must
+      be tutorials written in DocBook XML article format using the template in
+      the <filename>example-tutorial</filename> directory. Each tutorial
       <emphasis>must</emphasis> be in its own directory. No XML files should be
       in the root directory.
     </para>
-- 
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