From 6884eb9d4290ed77ad473eb0a1954ce6ba7c607e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dayle Parker <dayleparker@redhat.com>
Date: Mon, 10 Jun 2013 17:32:59 +1000
Subject: Edited vitrio-rng description for F19

---
 en-US/Products.xml         | 16 ++++++++++++----
 en-US/Revision_History.xml | 17 +++++++++++++++--
 2 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en-US/Products.xml b/en-US/Products.xml
index cf5f137..8d9554c 100644
--- a/en-US/Products.xml
+++ b/en-US/Products.xml
@@ -378,16 +378,16 @@
                               Para-virtualized devices are drivers for virtual devices that increase the I/O performance of virtual machines. 
                         </para>
                         <para>
-                              Para-virtualized devices decrease I/O latency and increase I/O throughput to near bare-metal levels. It is recommended to use the para-virtualized drivers for virtual machines running I/O intensive applications.
+                              Para-virtualized devices decrease I/O latency and increase I/O throughput to near bare-metal levels. It is recommended to use the para-virtualized device drivers for virtual machines running I/O intensive applications.
                         </para>
                         <para>
-                           The para-virtualized devices must be installed on the guest operating system. <!--Fedora equivalent? By default, the para-virtualized drivers are included in Red Hat Enterprise Linux 4.7 and newer, Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5.4 and newer and Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6.0 and newer.--> The para-virtualized drivers must be manually installed on Windows guests.
+                           The para-virtualized devices must be installed on the guest operating system. The para-virtualized device drivers must be manually installed on Windows guests.
                         </para>
-<!--                        <note>
+                        <note>
                               <para>
                                  For more information on using the para-virtualized drivers, refer to the <citetitle>Fedora Virtualization Deployment and Administration Guide</citetitle>.
                               </para>
-                        </note>-->
+                        </note>
                         <variablelist>
                            <varlistentry>
                               <term>The para-virtualized network driver (virtio-net)</term>
@@ -437,6 +437,14 @@
                                     </para>
                              </listitem>
                            </varlistentry>
+                           <varlistentry>
+                              <term>The para-virtualized random number generator (virtio-rng)</term>
+                              <listitem>
+                                    <para>
+                                          The para-virtualized random number generator enables virtual machines to collect entropy, or randomness, directly from the host to use for encrypted data and security. Virtual machines can often be starved of entropy because typical inputs (such as hardware usage) are unavailable. Sourcing entropy can be time-consuming; virtio-rng makes this process faster by injecting entropy directly into guest virtual machines from the host.
+                                    </para>
+                             </listitem>
+                           </varlistentry>
                         </variablelist>                         
                 </section>
                 <section>
diff --git a/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
index 62b87dd..d8984ce 100644
--- a/en-US/Revision_History.xml
+++ b/en-US/Revision_History.xml
@@ -9,6 +9,21 @@
 		<revhistory>
 			<!--EDIT MY REVNUMBER AND DESCRIPTION AT RELEASE TIME FOR MAJOR REVISION-->
                         <revision>
+                                <revnumber>1.0-10</revnumber>
+                                <date>Thursday May 30, 2013</date>
+                                <author>
+                                        <firstname>Dayle</firstname>
+                                        <surname>Parker</surname>
+                                        <email>dayleparker@redhat.com</email>
+                                </author>
+                                <revdescription>
+                                        <simplelist>
+                                          <member>Added virtio-rng description to Para-virtualized Devices section.</member>
+                                          <member>Revised Para-virtualized Devices section based on SME feedback.</member>
+                                        </simplelist>
+                                </revdescription>
+                        </revision>
+			<revision>
                                 <revnumber>1.0-09</revnumber>
                                 <date>Monday May 27, 2013</date>
                                 <author>
@@ -19,8 +34,6 @@
                                 <revdescription>
                                         <simplelist>
                                           <member>Updated CPU Models section based on SME feedback.</member>
-                                          <member>Added Virtio-RNG description to Para-virtualized Devices section.</member>
-                                          <member>Revised Para-virtualized Devices section based on SME feedback.</member>
                                         </simplelist>
                                 </revdescription>
                         </revision>
-- 
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